Hello

Aahhh (Scream of frustration) Our Goddess Luna damn you Solar Empire

welcome to the little slice of the MLPFIM Fanfiction community that I have claimed. The months of lurking, indulging in idle fantasies in between PT and getting yelled finally came to ahead last night when I created my own account after listening to far too much NLR fan music. After that I bashed out 3500 words in a few hours and came up with a plan for a long story explaining the utter wrongness of certain aspects of the show.

Don't get me wrong, I love the whole up beat perfect world that is Equestria, but some things I'm just like... Huh? That's damn evil. Cutie Marks = Evil, Goddess interfering in the matters of mortals = Evil, Censoring Derpy = beyond Evil. That coupled with the abysmal ending to Mass Effect 3, I needed an outlet... So you can blame Bioware, or thank them (But still blame them).

Ugh, why, why did I turn to writing fan fiction? I have my own IPs... Argh

Ok, so all of my main characters have some sexual motivation, I'll warn you now. When I'm writing them I'm picturing Humans with wings or horns and a tramp stamp, so I don't consider my self a clopper and I'm not going to spell an encounter out for you, it will always fade to black after some suggestive nuzzling. I don't get the attraction to Ponies... I get the attraction to the personalities, but not the sexual attraction. no R34 here.

So read my story, like it, tell me what you think. Anything, I love constructive criticism... aside from editing... I ALWAYS MISS SOMETHING, every time I read through it I see something I missed. How ever sentence structure, verbs, nouns... throw a thesaurus at me. Whether you like the themes, whether you disagree with the way the themes are portrayed, whether my characters are under or over developed, the overall flow of the story... please, I know I'm not absolute shit but I'm not the best either. When the story flows from my fingers its one of the most enjoyable experiences.

Luna hide my footsteps