May
23rd
2013
New story surprise. · 3:45am May 23rd, 2013
Well, this was unexpected.
So I posted up a little story I'd been working on, Under The Radiant Sun. I honestly wasn't thinking much would come of it, seeing as I wasn't planning on posting it in the first place. The response has been overly positive, and... I've been beaming all day. You guys really are awesome. Considering this was my first Mature story, and my first try at second person story-telling, you readers give me all the feels.
I just want to take this time to say...
Thank You.
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BaronVonStallion · 309 views
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No need dude (or dudet) you made a very good story, and for that I have to ask you, if you have plans to continue with a sequel, or make other stories with the same content?
If you need some ideas, what about the all classic, political and royal pressure, that now that he is with Celestia he will have to quit his job (what was his job anyway? He couldn't possible have being living in the castle a whole year without doing anything, anybody would have got nuts, the first 3 mounts)
And start to learn the ways of hight society and royalty.
Maybe even have to pass a few military training. Just a suggestion.
Or perhaps, a second changeling attack, but this time Chrysalis will target, them. Make a small conflict between the 2, then attack Celestia with her guard down, and take her place. That could work