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ColoradoBlueJay

I have drones circling the whole world.

ColoradoBlueJay Joined 14th Mar, 2013 · Offline

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  • 504 weeks
    homecoming

    This really isn't a homecoming, and even thouh you may have thought there would be a new chapter for BFF's... there really isnt. :( Anyhow, I haven't been on fimfiction for over 10 weeks now, and here's my reasons why..
    1: School
    2: Looking for a job
    3: Ebola
    and 4: DESTINY, OMFG ITS THE BEST!

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    0 comments · 562 views

  • 525 weeks
    Updates and shiz

    So as most of you know BFF's is coming to an end. I am working so hard to make it entertaining. So I hope you love the living shit out of it.

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    0 comments · 370 views

  • 525 weeks
    BFF's update!

    If you haven't seen the new episodes of Battle Field Friends, I strongly advise you do so. In other words, the season finale for the Equestrian DLC starts today. I'm going to either make it super long or have multiple parts to it. Comment what you'd rather want, and I'll provide.

    7 comments · 448 views

  • 530 weeks
    BFF's epic season finale!

    Okay, so as most of you know there hasn't been an updated chapter to BFF's, and the last chapter was around 800 words. Bleh. Well honestly this story is kinda a big pain in the butt to write. So in order to make it up to you, and since I'm running out of ideas, I am going to write and epic finale including DICE, and a hint of levolution. Sorry for the short storyline and such, but I'll write a

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    2 comments · 422 views

  • 533 weeks
    BFF's is going into hiatus

    JK!!! Well I just broke up with my lying girlfriend. So now I have time to attend to you guys. Any BF gamer girls out there, I'm single and ready to mingle. ;)

    3 comments · 390 views
May
19th
2013

The collector · 4:09pm May 19th, 2013

Please if you have any suggesting or noticed anything about any of my stories please tell me on this blog. When suggesting or telling me about my mistakes please put your comment as so...
-TITLE
-SUGGEST/ or MISTAKE
-Then put an emoticon on how you feel about the story so far

Thanks and have a wonderful day. :)

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Comments ( 1 )
Kenpatchi_Ramusama
Kenpatchi_Ramusama #1 · May 22nd, 2013 · · ·
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Title: Revolutionaries

Suggestion: I suggest that you try to re-write the story description to make it more interesting to any possible viewers. If you need help with making a good fic description, I highly recommend the "School for New Writers" group. Just find one of the professors and message him some details about your fic and the description and they'll make suggestions.

Mistake: There are a ton of spelling errors, but those are easy to spot and fix. I also found that some word usage is a little off.

So far i feel: :applejackunsure: This has only one chapter so I'm not going to form any definitive opinions, but I do suggest letting someone blast the grammar errors in the future. :twilightsmile:

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