Update: Of Loyalty and Chaos Chapter 16: A Canterlot Wedding Pt.2 (Part 2) · 6:27am May 11th, 2013
Hey all,
Another update on the story. I am still working on it, and hope to have it done soon. I know I keep saying that, but it's a surprising hard chapter to write.
That being said, I wrote a fun little part earlier and I am willing to share it here as a sample, as proof that I am indeed working :)
If you have been reading my story, you know I don't put as much wacky stuff in as the show actually does, so this part was tricky to write and feel fitting.
Twilight shot another bolt of magic at a copy of herself, pulling it from its disguise and throwing it back. Thankfully while the changelings had numbers on their side, their magic wasn't strong and they didn't seem to resilient to damage.
"We have to step this up. There are too many of them and the Princesses need our help. Something drastic needs to happ...ACK!" Twilight was cut short with her thought as she was suddenly yanked away from her spot by Pinkie Pie. At the best of times, being abducted by Pinkie was concerning to anypony, but in a fight it was the last thing Twilight would want to deal with. As she was about to speak these thoughts, she felt Pinkie grab her tail and point her horn at the horde of enemies while cackling in glee. Suddenly she started cranking Twilight's tail like a handle and, for reasons that Twilight would probably never figure out, her own magic started to respond, firing rapidly at whatever Pinkie pointed her at. The magic wasn't strong, but Twilight could tell it would do the job, and started knocking changelings out rapidly. The whole thing was so ridiculous that Twilight nearly shook her head in exasperation, but held off knowing it would corrupt Pinkie's aim.
I hope you get as much of a kick out of that part as I did writing it, and stay tuned. Soon the whole chapter will be available to read.
