B&P's SBS update coming soon. · 4:16am May 9th, 2013
After scrounging around my schedule, sifting through for whatever gaps of free time I could find, I've managed to almost complete the next chapter of "Bowser and Pinkie's Super Bizarre Sage".
Why almost? Because I'm laz--I mean because I'm a hard dedicated pony--heh, called myself a pony--who wants to make sure what I post is perfect. Or at least decent enough that it doesn't read like it was written around the wee hours of the morning in a sleep deprived stupor. And don't worry bout the whole lack of sleep thing. If I didn't stay up and write these stories, they'd plague me incessantly.
ANY-WHO, the main point I'm trying to get out is that I'm in need of some proof readers for the next chapter. BTW, I do remember getting aid before with this story, I've just completely forgotten by whom. I'm sorry I'm forgetful. I'm scum. But I'm looking to see if anyone who reads my little collective hand smacks against my keyboard would be interested in checking it out for error? Of course I know I can seek one of the many proof reading groups on the site, but idunno, this way tends to work quicker.
Now it will still be a bit, perhaps a day or two. Mostly because making up words to a song is a challenge.
What? Yes a song. It an ongoing adventure with Pinkie Pie, of course there has to be a random song out of nowhere. It's part of who she is.
Back on track. I think it'll be best if I split the chapter into two parts for the reviewers. Seeing as the next chapter's over nine thousand... Don't any of you dare make that joke. I wasn't. It just turned out that way. But since it is so large, splitting it into smaller parts might be easier on whoever takes a look at it. Unless you're a sadist and wish to tackle this mountain in it entirety.
Now then, broken record time. Look out for the following errors:
Missing punctuation and spelling. (I'm getting better at not doing there, honest.)
Duplicate words. (Happens during sleepy writing and I make changes.)
Nonsensical sentence structure. (What can I say, sleepy writing is a hell of a, condition?)
If you happen to find anything else, point it out and make it clear I screwed up. Each error I'm shown may feel like I'm getting stabbed in the gut by a sharp icicle, but its for my own good. I must learn.
Ahem. Let me know if you're up for it and I'll send you the link and password to review it.
After this update, I've gotta see what to update next. I feel like each of my stories is a point where big stuff is going down and I've got a mountain of stuff to write. This is gonna so much fun.
Not sarcastic by the way.