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JaydexTheShadowKnight


I'm an avid writer that enjoys creating human x pony romance stories. If you like what you've read, then perhaps you'd Buy Me A Coffee?

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Apr
18th
2013

Well, I didn't expect THIS! · 1:50am Apr 18th, 2013

Hello my friends. I must apologize for the delay in posting this blog. I was going to do this last night, but yesterday morning, when I got home, I received a very disturbing PM from one of my newer followers. I was half-asleep at the time, so I didn't think much of it at first. But, after I got up yesterday and checked into what I was told, I found out that a writer on here plagiarized love scenes from three of my most popular stories and use them in a clop chapter of his story. I'm not going to name this individual right now, I've PM'd one of the mods on here and asked for their advice/assistance in this matter. But last night as I checked out the chapter of the writer's story, I found that pretty much word for word they copied the love scenes from the following: The three-way love scene from "More Than Their Customer", the love scene from Chapter 5 of "You Brighten My Day" and the love scene from Chapter 1 of "For Whom She Sparkles". The only thing they did was change character names, add some minor filler and lightly adjust the style from 2nd-person to 3rd-person. Though they did a sloppy job. There are potions where they left in the present tenses and "yous" of my 2nd-person stylings. Plus they failed to remove one intance of Lotus's name. Their ponies are anthro and yet they left 4 variations of "hoof" in there. Plus, you know I am probably one of the only writers on here that refers to a pony's marehood as a crescent. I know, I've yet to read any clopfics that refer to it as such.

This whole situation has left me feeling a bit miffed. Thankfully I have plenty of evidence in my favor, plus my stories all posted to the site long before his chapter. I just didn't feel like blogging or writing last night after I spent over an hour carefully preparing a PM for one of FIMfiction's mods. I never thought anyone would think my writing good enough to steal, that's for sure. Developments at work didn't help me last night either, and I'm not going into details about that.

Thankfully, despite all this chaos, I'm still pressing on. I just have to wait for now and see what the mods will say. In the meantime, I've still managed to stay in good spirits. Tonight I had a good session of writing and added nearly 1,400 words to my Rainbow Dash story and just need to do the cuddle scene and I'll be done with the first love scene. It got a bit longer than I expected, but I had some fun experimenting and I think plenty of you will be in for a treat. Tomorrow, if all goes well, I should finally get to the core of the story, which will only add to "your" relationship with Rainbow Dash. Now, I'm not sure how long it's going to be till I'm done with this. The length keeps changing. Currently, I have 9,069 words!

You know one things for sure, my new plush Dashie has helped me stay chipper. And since I've been able to connect to Rainbow's character, the writing has gone so much better. I'm glad I stuck it out and didn't decide to skip over this one.

For now, I'm going to call it a night, before I have to head back to work. Thank you all as always for your support and know I will overcome this ordeal! Take care!

- Jaydex

One thing's for sure, I've developed strong feelings for Rainbow Dash, and I think that's going to help make this story great!

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They say that imitation is the purest form of flattery.

Tsk, Well, I guess if anything, the silver lining is that your stories are so good they wanted to copy you to get followers.

Uh, congrats I guess? Sucks that someone stole your work, but hey, they decided to steal your work! :applejackunsure:

so good people will steal it that is sad but it also shoes how good you are

This is a perfect example of a bittersweet moment. bitter that they tried to steal your work but sweet that it was your stuff they decided to steal.:unsuresweetie:

1016197 well, you know what they-:derpyderp1: DAMN IT! I WANTED TO SAYAN THAT!:flutterrage:

Apparently they could only write bronze material, so they had to steal your platinum. I'm saddened by this, but I'm sure you'll get the issue sorted out.

And I would have gotten away with it, too. If it wasn't for you pesky mares and your dragon!




Kidding, in case anyone doesn't know.

Link us to him so we may purge and burn this worthless rat, then trash his PC afterwards.
Worthless scum like them do not even deserve to live, but die a horrible death, along with their mother who produced this abomination.

Death to them, I say.
Pfft.

Flattery done in the wrong way.:rainbowlaugh:

Nopony can do what you do for your storys and take all the time you need to do that Rainbow Dash story. I think a lot of people will agree with me when I say, "The longer we wait the better it will be for you and me (and them to). So have a moustache on me, my good friend.:moustache:

Hmmm.....this is certainly unexpected - I would ask you to be careful with such accusations, given that I'm usually the type to defend people who have been charged with plagiarism, but if you've checked the person yourself, and it's literally as copy-and-pasted as blatantly as you say it is, then their is really no question....It's not about coincidence or any some such: it truly is a crime of plagiarism and you know because of how poorly it was.

It's....really something, in all honesty, you could almost call it flattery: someone loves your work so much, that they would do something like this :rainbowderp::derpytongue2:.

But it's wonderful that you were notified - I'm sorry that things at work apparently didn't go so well for you either....sounds like things went sour right after your vacation :pinkiesad2:: I'm happy though that it seems you are trying to persevere and keeping a good attitude :twilightsmile: - indeed, that you are so mellow and keep a perky attitude, is one of the good qualities that you have, and one I certainly try to maintain as well :pinkiesmile:.

Try to take things one step at a time, and make sure to keep that positive attitude! :raritywink:

I am disappointed as of late with all the plagiarizing going on. In my class apparently a lot of people plagiarized and did a sloppy job doing so :trixieshiftleft: I mean really it's not right to take others peoples work that they put time into :ajbemused: I spend probably around 15 minutes each time before I right something for one of my stories (I have been trying something new with my writing, if I don't have anything else to do I will write down a rough draft for my story, then type it while adding in words and details, check it, then send in for edits) :twilightsmile: I can also tell that this Rainbow story will be great so everyone just has to pull through :yay: :heart: :rainbowdetermined2:

Youre a writer who works his talents above the clouds and stars. Such injust acts are so, so, so...I'm appalled by this news. The nerve of some people. Didn't even do a decent job covering their acts well. I do hope this doesn't bother you so.
Oh, two things:
1) I use the word "crescent" when comes to the terminology for the word "vagina". I find it to be such an appealing and rich word to use.
*2) Where exactly can you get the best quality plushies for MLP? I'm starting to get into that phase.

Blatant plagiarism eh? Mildly flattering but ultimately fucked up. Prepare the Banhammer!!!!

This just serves to better reinforce my college instructor, "If you try to steal another authors work, you will be caught no matter how sneaky you might think you are". Low and behold, this person has been caught. Best of luck getting this incident cleared up and i look forward to more of your work!:heart:

"Wakey, wakey... come on..."

As her beloved, David, gently combed her mane and scratched behind her ears - nudging her here and there to try to wake her up - Princess Luna sighed softly. Yawning, she nuzzled and nosed foallike into the crook of his arm, before replacing her head atop her chest in a more comfortable position.

"Come on, sweetie" the human coaxed, "you've got Evening Court in half an hour; that and you need to raise the moon. If you don't, Celly 'll throw a fit..."

At his words - desperate to remain within the sanctuary of warmth and comfort - Luna groaned and rolled over in their shared bed 'till she lay on her back. "Nnn... Nooooo" she moaned as David began to rub over her belly, "dun' wanna..." Her behaviour made David chuckle, even as he leaned over to kiss her upon the nose. "You" *kiss* "need" *kiss* "to" *kiss* "wake" *kiss* "up" *kiss* "right" *kiss* "now," ending every word with a little kiss.

The Lunar Diarch just giggled and batted him playfully with a hoof. "Dun' wanna..." she repeated.

Thus, David decided to bring out one of his secret weapons. Taking her right forehood gently in hand, he ever-so-gently traced a pattern over the very sensitive underside. "This little pony went to market..." said he; then he repeated the gesture with her left, "and this little pony stayed home."

Squirming and writhing, the Moon Princess could only giggle helplessly as David then did the same to her left hindhoof, "This little pony had roast hay..." and the same to her right, "and this little pony had none... And this little pony went 'whinny-whinny-whinny' all the way home." And then David tickled her sensitive ribs, causing her to snap awake and neigh with laughter, helpless beneath his questing fingers. "Ah, hah-hah-hah-hah-hah... st-st-stop it!" she gasped through her joyful laughter, her human's face crinkling into a smile as he gazed upon her. "I'm awake! I'm awake! Hah-hah-hah!" But alas, he refused to stop; only ceasing his relentless attack when she was flushed, breathless and panting gazing up into his eyes. Then, David kissed her, a gesture that made her moan quietly as she closed her eyes and leaned in.

Then, a moment later, cold hard reality hit as David pulled away, pulling the duvet aside as he stated softly, "Come on sweetheart; Moon Raising then Evening Court..." With the most adorable pout wrinkling her muzzle, Luna snorted then sighed through her nose. "Oh, alright..." she grumbled.

Thieves should be punished for their failure to get s*** done on their own or get what they want through fair means!
You hath gained strong feelings for Rainbow Dash? Same as I, tis' a great thing.
9000 words in that Rainbow Dash story? Hell yeah baby WOOOOOO!
Praise Jaydex, Praise Rainbow Dash, Praise the Nine Divines!

Huh...buh...wow. I am sorry to hear that. I'm not really sure what my reaction would be if my own lackluster work was plagiarized (that'll be the day), but it would probably be anger. So I'm very sorry to hear that. You're a tremendously talented writer and you don't deserve this crap.

Keep on, bro! Can't wait to see your newest work! I love me some RD...

1016317 You unofficially win the best post of the day award.

Well that's just downright rude. Good luck getting it all sorted.

Plus, you know I am probably one of the only writers on here that refers to a pony's marehood as a crescent.

Yeah... I do that as well.

I am flabbergasted at this... I don't even know what to say!!! (Which is ironic after having just said "flabbergasted") :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

1016317 Dude if it had been you, why would you be drawing attention to yourself on Jay's blog? It's pretty clear you aren't being serious. :twilightsmile:

1017062 Because I'd be a dastardly villain with a mustache to twhirl.

I couldn't really be mad if I found someone that had done this to me. Think about it, everything we do is tantamount to IP theft. We take something that Lauren worked hard to make, for lack of a better word, utopian, and we add terrible emotions like hate and anger. We show some of the worst times in a pony's life. We write of things that are terrible.

We ruin what she has worked hard on, so how can I be mad at someone for doing, as near as makes no difference, the same thing to me?

1017137 Fell asleep a third of the way through your response. :ajsleepy:

1017149 lol. Tldr is "pointless words followed by more pointless words"

This is a really good sign...I mean how you write your stories
are...Well I'm wordless what to say about your stories.I just put a ...:heart::heart::heart::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:and the happy ending is:twilightblush:.and sometimes :raritydespair:
"Just keep doing what you do."
Oh,cute picture

It was a great day to be outside and letting the
sun hit my skin.Oh and getting wet.

FlutterShy:So,where are we gonna set up.
Just below that tree.
FlutterShy:OKay,then what are we waiting for let's go!
Alright alright,lets then.
FlutterShy:(This is perfect,now I can get him in my
hoof.)
Okay,looks like I'm done setting up here.
(Maybe I could give her some sunblo...
wait,no she my act funny like last time,but I
do want to be polite.)
FlutterShy:Hey,can you put sunblock it is kind of hot
and I don't want to have a sunburn.
(Is she...like what reading my mind.}
Okay.:twilightoops:

You have to listen to the song its very funny
Random song time BitterSweet

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I greatly appreciate your support and loyalty, but I'd rather let the mods handle this. Believe me, it's very tempting to let you all know who did this, but I don't want any of you to get in trouble while coming to my aid. Besides, I'm sure the mods will deal out an appropriate punishment to him.

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Yeah, I know what you mean. It is flattering that they thought enough of my work to steal it, but again they stole it, hence like you said, bittersweet. I'm sure the mods will help sort this out. I just need to be patient.

1016260
You and me both, I'm sure time is all we need.

1016781
Thanks for the support, I hope this gets cleared up too. And glad you're looking forward to more of my work. :raritywink:

1016536
I won't let this keep me down, last night's progress on my Rainbow Dash story was proof of that. Second, I'm glad you like using "crescent" as well. It's a fun word that gives you the basic appearance of female anatomy without sounding too raunchy. As for plushies, I've share pics of the ones I have. I got most from a seller on ebay. I could get you the link if you want, and my adorable Rainbow Dash came from Build-A-Bear Workshop. Currently they have Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie. They are planning on eventually having all of the main six, but the next two aren't expected till November. :raritydespair: And if you don't have a Build-A-Bear near you, you can order off their website. Let me know if you want that other link. :twilightsmile:

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Thank you, here's hoping all goes well. And it's nice to know a few other writers like using "crescent" as well. That's why I said, I think I'm one of the only writers and not the only writer. I suspected others use it as well. :raritywink:

1017062
That's a good word for it. Hopefully the mods can help me with this matter. And regardless of this, I'll press on. :eeyup:

1016851
Yeah, I agree thieves should get theirs! And yes, I have gained strong feelings for Rainbow. I'll let you in or a little secret. It helps me write a convincing tale when I'm in love with the pony I'm writing about. It may be a little odd, but it's one of my many techniques. :scootangel: And the RD story is 9,000+ words and counting! :rainbowdetermined2:

1016960
This should be a grand RD fic when it's done! I hope. :twilightsheepish:

1016742
That would be a fitting punishment for them. This whole matter is a pity. :facehoof:

1016524
Since this story is already nearing it's projected length and isn't even at the offical half-way point, I think it will be something special! :pinkiehappy: And it's shame about all this plagiarism. :fluttershysad:

1016450
I really hope you'll like this one. I just need to check over the clop of the first love scene and make sure it worked out the way I intended and then I can move on. :yay:

1017137
I hope you won't TL;DR this comment.

You have a point, but aside from adding a mature romantic overlay to the ponies and my shipping them with loving humans, I don't pit them at their worst without a happy ending, and second my stories are known as happy and heart warming, despite their mature content. I love the characters Faust has given us. And you won't see me doing horrible things to the ponies just for the sake of portraying them in agony. And if they are sad or ailing, someone will be along to comfort them. When my stories tend to go that way, feels and dawws usually follow. :raritywink:

There is one point I want to make. None of us claim Faust's creations as our own, and we all acknowledge her in one way or another. So no plagiarizing of her creations is really going on here. Unless someone claims they came up with MLP - FIM. And I certainly do not.

1016455
Don't worry my friend, I very reluctantly checked out their story, but when my own words jumped out at me from around the names of his characters, I felt so....violated and almost sick to my stomach. It wasn't fun to discover this and then have to contact the mods at all. But I worked hard on my stories, especially my spa pony fic. So after verifying that my work was all but taken 100% word for word, I was compelled to take action. If someone were to steal content from my novel, I would have the right to sue them since it's protected by an official legal copyright. I pray it would never come to that. You know I'm not a vengeful person, just from how you go on about me in your comments. I just want to get a response from the mods when they have a chance and put this whole mess behind me. That's why I kept writing last night. I won't let them get me down. :twilightsmile:

1017201
Worry not, this whole mess won't stop me. And hey, a new fluttersy blurb! :yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay::yay: Hmm, I hope you remembered to pack the suntan lotion! :raritywink:

O__________________________________________O
This... just... happened... I thought something like this would NEVER happen on this site... or in the brony community for that matter. I mean, we buy the albums of the musicians, ask an artist for permission to use a picture and do animations for people. Jumping to the Stories topic, we ask for permission to use an OC, ask for proofreader, editor and do collabs. :twilightoops:
Damn it, it was so nice before I knew that something like that happened... especially to you! :fluttercry:

Well, I hope everything will be fine and I'm waiting for the Rainbow Dash story. :pinkiesmile:
Have a fantastic day!
~Adam

1016818
Another classic short! I enjoyed it thoroughly, it cheered me up too! :twilightsmile:

BTW, check for my reply in the other blog! :scootangel:

1017296 Nope, we don't plagiarize, but every story is a broken copyright law. Every piece of fan art is a broken copyright law. Etc. etc.

Intellectual property is aptly named, it's not just protecting the show, toys, shirts, and other physical material. It states that Hasbro and their subsidiaries own the idea of MLP.

The difference between the two is negligible, IMHO. Hence, my comment.

Screw the guy who plagiarized your story.

Also, 9609 words so far? W00t w00t!

Currently, I have 9,069 words!

Well... You know what that calls for!
images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20091225205919/meme/images/2/20/Over9000S.jpg
OVER NINE THOUSAAAAAAAND!

Yikes. Sorry to hear that you were a victim of theft. *Hugs* Anyway, nice to hear that your RD fic is coming along nicely.

BTW,
iaza.com/work/130419C/iaza13393144116700.jpg
you've yet to accept my contact request.

1017296

I'm so sorry that you felt abused Jaydex :pinkiesick: - as before, I'm usually the sort to defend people who get attacked with supposedly "plagiarizing", but this isn't the case of following the same or similar train of thought, or a coincidence or whatever....it's simply too close to be anything else, and you've caught them making little mistakes here or there in their handiwork....so unfortunately, their is no doubt about it :fluttershyouch:.

In a sense Jaydex, the whole matter is already behind you - you've alerted the Mods, and they will take care of the rest....just try to put it behind you: you've got more important things on your mind :pinkiesmile:.

No, I know you are not vengeful or vindictive...you are better then that, and it shows in your writing: as I said, just let it go, and let the proper authorities deal with it now...as before, you have better things to concern yourself with then silly shenanigans. You should also feel proud that you've built up a loyal and dedicated audience enough that someone would alert you to this :twilightsmile::raritystarry::heart:.

Ugh, sorry to hear about what that supposed "writer" did to you. I hope he/she gets what's coming to them.

1017296
I would appreciate a link if you can provide one. There is not a single Build-a-Bear even close to my area of living.:facehoof:

1017296 Indeed, you will just hope the mods look at this quickly and resolve it.

1017296 That's the thing to do, move forward in the face of adversity. :rainbowdetermined2:

:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:
How dare they!! Stealing!! That is the epitome of reprehensible.

Please please please be over 10k words. But no pressure.

1018402
"Please be over 10k words."

The story is barely half-way at 9,069 words, so that shouldn't be a problem. :raritywink:

1018242
That's the plan my friend. :scootangel:

1018083
Here's hoping. I just don't know how many PMs they each receive in a day, so it could be a little while. Plus they'll have to investigate as well.

1018043
I'll give you both links:

Build-A-Bear - and keep in mind Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie look so much better in person, than in their pictures. I've noticed that when I share pics of my other plush ponies as well. Pics just don't do them justice.

KopesKreations - This is the seller that makes all the other plush ponies I have. They generally sell as "Buy-It Now" for $70-$80. And if they don't have a plush of a certain pony, you can email them and request one. And they tend to be a little busy with conventions, so it can sometimes take a little longer to get your ponies, when they're out of town, but I can tell you, they are worth the wait. :twilightsmile: Oh yeah, they do make some ponies that cost a little more. I requested to have Cadence made and she costs $95. Hope this helps you get some cute plush ponies of your own.

I'm just grateful for theirs, because other plushies tend to sell for $200-$800, I kid you not. A Derpy sold for $728 on ebay one time. :pinkiegasp: If I bought a plush for that, I'd be afraid to touch it, let along give it a hug. :twilightsheepish:

1017989
That's why I contacted the mods. Hopefully they'll know what to do.

1017784
I am putting this behind me. It's shame, but thankfully I have such a supportive group of followers cheering me on through all of this. :scootangel::yay:

1017745
Sorry! I haven't had time to pop onto Skype. As soon a I do, I'll be all to happy to accept your request. :twilightsmile: It's been a tiring work week, and it's only half over. :twilightsheepish:

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You know, I never get tired of that meme! But then I'm a DBZ nut. That's why I've got a MLP & DBZ crossover story up on here. :pinkiehappy: BTW, I thought the same thing when I saw the word count last night. In fact, I said aloud - "It's Over 9,000!" :rainbowlaugh:

I always think of this video when I use that meme:

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Yes w00t indeed! :pinkiehappy::rainbowwild: And more to come! :raritywink:

1017503
Perhaps the same could be said of every fandom. And let's not forget about "fair use".

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I know what you mean. And even if I can't contact an artist to get permission to use their work for a cover pic, I always give them credit and if they have a Deviant Art page, I'll happily link to theirs, so they can get the ovations they deserve. :scootangel:

Oh well, at least I've pretty much put this behind me, and have left things in the hands of he mods, I know they can help. :raritystarry: And my Rainbow Dash story is coming along slowly but surely. :twilightsmile:

Laying there with her beloved, Princess Celestia heaved a weary sigh as Daniel gently ran the brush through her mane. "I... I'd always had some trouble dealing with the Ambassador of the Dragons, but... I've never known him to be that rude..." she murmured, gently tap-tapping his thigh in appreciation as the human continued to run the brush through the natural pink hair. "Well... he's a dragon, love; they're always going to be more... caustic... than ponies. Still, I do agree that he could've been politer to you, though you must remember that the Dragon Migration is coming soon; the poor fellow is probably anxious to stretch his wings..." As Celestia murmured in agreement, with those words Daniel finished his gentle work upon her mane and the Solar Princess - her horn aglow with magic - prepared to levitate it back to her dresser. However, no sooner had she begun the process then the magic of her horn sputtered, flickered and died and she winced, whimpering in pain. 'That's not good...' the human thought. Setting the mane brush aside, Daniel gently moved Celestia's head to rest upon one of the bed's many pillows before moving to search through his special 'Alicorn Care Kit' that he kept in his night table; a set of tools for dealing with certain ailments that he'd purchased from various specialists throughout Equestria.

Extracting from the kit a long thin baton-like instrument, Daniel gently tapped it against the top of her horn. Celestia's eyes widened as a clear-sounding chime was produced; she knew what the instrument was, of course, she just didn't expect her love to have one. The device was used to check the magical conduits within a unicorn's horn for blockage. 'Where did he get the bits to purchase one of those?' she wondered. A moment later her wonderment ceased as Daniel used the baton-device - which was called a 'Resonator' - again, this time tapping her horn from the top to the base; each time the device struck her horn a clear note was produced, except for when he tapped her horn-base. There, the Resonator's tone became dull, and at this, Daniel frowned in concern. Collapsing the Resonator, Daniel placed it back into the kit... and then Celestia's eyes went wide as he extracted a small box with a crank-handle and five metal-wire probes attached to it. Slowly, carefully, gently - even as the Solar Diarch whined and struggled - he attached the metal probes to the base of her horn. "I'm sorry Celly, but this has to be done..." he murmured. Her eyes misty with tears, Celestia nodded and then - with the probes correctly attached - Daniel picked up the small box and cranked the handle. One, two, three, four times Daniel did this; each time there was a gentle click as the device released a jolt of magical energy through the probes and into her horn to both widen and stimulate the blocked conduit within.

The process wasn't pleasant; on the contrary it was quite painful and Celestia winced with each jolt of energy forced into her horn. By the time he was done with the process Celestia was keening softly, her muzzle wet with tears and Daniel had to harden his heart, lest he join her crying. However... the worst was yet to come. The stimulator... using it was akin to pouring water into a glass already full... to make said glass overflow! No sooner had Daniel finished his work with the stimulator then Celestia raised her head, her eyes rolled wildly and a scream ripped from her throat as a huge glut of trapped raw magical energy surged from her spiral horn unto reality in the form of sunlight; it was all Daniel could do to cover his eyes lest he be made blind! Another scream escaped Celestia and then, thankfully, it was over; Celestia's head fell limp unto the pillow as she began to weep from the pain of having a main magical conduit unblocked. After carefully packing away his tools, all Daniel could do was hold the Solar Princess close, softly begging her forgiveness and he did this even as her two Dawn Custodes - her personal guard - burst into the room, wondering what had happened. Still holding his beloved close, Daniel pulled out the stimulator again and then carefully explained what had needed to be done. Upon seeing the device, both guards -winced- in sympathy and then - with hooves covering their horns, they quickly vacated the room.

As Celestia's tears slowed and her weeping ceased, Daniel retrieved the Alicorn Care Kit and then proceeded to comb her mane again, brush her coat, preen her wings, and massage her with his hands 'till the Solar Diarch was utterly insensate, cooing softly with pleasure as she wriggled about on her back, looking up at her beloved with doe-eyes. "Mmmh... Thank you..." she rasped, thickly, her throat raw from her earlier screaming. Immediately Daniel moved to retrieve a chilled water from the private ice box and give it to her. She took it from his hand - successfully this time as her horn was working properly - uncapped it, and drank deeply. When she was done, she sent the bottle back from whence it came and then she and Daniel settled down once more, the human setting her head atop his chest that he could gently massage the base of her horn. "You've got to exercise your magic more, love" he murmured as she groaned and sighed softly in pleasure from his touch. "You've got to, or this might happen again..." As one, they moved into bed proper and Celestia nickered a soft reply in Ponytongue - "Prefer to do things by hoof..." - or, she thought she did; she was utterly worn out, warm, comfortable, and just too tired to make her mouth and tongue work right. Daniel smiled as she nickered again, nuzzling into the crook of his arm, foal-like, then sighed through her nose as he stimulated her horn with his hands, easing out a few last dredges of backed up raw magic which lit up the room like some of Princess Luna's stars.

(Daniel loves Celestia and is interested in her, thus he'd want to take care of her should she ever become ill. I imagine he'd research Alicorns, and then stop by the Royal Clinic on occasion and plumb the doctors there for knowledge of minor things that can affect an Alicorn and have the docs teach him how to deal with them. Daniel isn't a licensed doctor, but I'd imagine he would learn enough basic medical skills to aid Celestia until a licensed pony doctor can arrive on scene to help...)

1018551 Well, as long as said person didn't get featured and a lot of followers from it, it shouldn't be to big of a deal. If it doesn't get resolved bu the big names, just contact the sub mod to look at it.

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Fair use is one of the most over-quoted and most misunderstood clause in any law I know of.

the fair use of a copyrighted work, including such use by reproduction in copies or phonorecords or by any other means specified by that section, for purposes such as criticism, comment, news reporting, teaching (including multiple copies for classroom use), scholarship, or research, is not an infringement of copyright.

That's directly from the copyright act. It goes on to say that, among other things, fair use can be overruled if the use of copyrighted IP is damaging to the nature or market of the IP.

Unfortunately, anything rated above "Everyone" (Generalization) falls under this category. Thus, even IF we qualified for fair use, it would be overruled by our own hand.

I don't mean to be argumentative, :twilightsheepish: but I do like a good debate, and I'm glad there IS a difference.

But you're right, the same can be said about any fandom.

1018551 Firstly, I never get tired of it either. Secondly, that video is awesome. Thirdly, YOU are awesome. Just saiyan.

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I'll give the 2nd incommand another day. If I don't hear anything, I'll contact one of the four sub-mods.

1018601 Sounds like a good plan. On a side note, Your newest story seems to be getting some good reviews so far. Not to mention altering your view a little about the athlete.:raritywink::rainbowlaugh:

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Glad you think I'm awesome! :twilightsheepish: And, ahhh, another classic meme! If you liked that video, you might enjoy this one, too:

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Another great short. You're going to offer me material to keep "You Brighten My Day" going on for at least 150 chapters. :rainbowlaugh: But, I'm totally okay with that! There's just something beyond enchanting about Celestia. And you seem to get how Daniel feels about her, even though their love is still quite young. :trollestia::yay: I so can't wait to work on my Luna and Celestia stories again.

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And nopony has even read a word of it. Some only recall the summary I posted about 40 blogs ago. :rainbowlaugh: But I've got some fun content for this. Including some that a few might not love so much, but the core of it should be thoroughly enjoyable for all. :pinkiehappy: The first love scene adds some new touches as well as some communication between "you" and Rainbow Dash, which helps to show case a side of Rainbow we've never seen and more importantly, why. :raritywink:

1018654 This fic sounds really fun if I do say so myself. You do a perfect job at bringing out sides of the ponies we never got to see before and that's what makes your work so special. And why I am inspired to write with a similar style. It is indeed time to make a name for the new generation of named writers like me, you and ABrony etc. :pinkiecrazy::rainbowlaugh:

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