First critic review

No one knows me but I am ponycritic the founder of critic bronies I recently made a group called critic bronies unite I'd love a brony critic on my side. I read a story called sleep trouble it's about the second best princess, that rules with her sister Princess Luna. I really liked it, good speeches and great backround if you don't like it I'd be suprised. The bad thing is well I said good from Luna's part but Celesta could have been better then that. But over all I give it an B+ for being creative.