the story of daraqus (script aka work in progress)

(Opens with a tall, red pony writing a letter by candle light, in a large stone room that resembles an ancient castle bed room. He is clothed in a gold armor that covers his dragon mark. His green and black mane and tail pulled threw the armor in a military fashion. Shadows move as the candle flickers. The sound of dragon roars sound from outside. The pony’s magic from his broken horn glows a dark red as he writes on the parchment. We hear his voice reading the letter aloud.)
Dear fluttershy
When we first met, I already knew you would be the one to set my path. I first saw you when we where only Phillies in class. You where always too busy watching the birds to notice me and I saw how you would rather be out with them than be stuck in class. I always sent you a card on hearts & hoofs day, but you never noticed. Every day I saw you all I could think of was being your special somepony. It wasn’t till you got your cutie mark that I finally found my way to your heart………
(The image and voice fade and we see a young pony, Daraqus, running up to a young fluttershy, who is taking care of some animals in a clearing in the woods)
Daraqus: “hey, fluttershy!
Fluttershy: “y-yes? Do I know you?”
Daraqus: “It’s me, Daraqus, from class?”
Shy: “o-oh hi Daraqus, do you need help?”
Daraqus: “no I just wanted to talk to you. I heard you got your cutie mark the other day!”
Shy: “y-yes I did. I take care of all the animals here.”
Daraqus: “Cool! It almost is the same as mine! I just got it today! I’m a Dragon Tamer! See?”
(Daraqus turns away from fluttershy as his horn glows a deep red and a large, black dragon lands beside them. Upon seeing the dragon fluttershy jumps, screams and runs away as fast as her legs can carry her. Daraqus, not realizing fluttershy ran away, turns to face her again, smiling at his accomplishment than sees she is no longer there, he looks at the ground, disappointed and his horn glows again, making the dragon take off and fly back where it came from.)
Narrator: “….you rejected me that day because you feared me, and I forgave you then because I still thought we could be together…..”
(The image fades to Daraqus finding fluttershy later but before he can apologize, she runs away. he walks, sadly, back to the town than the image fades to black)
Narrator: “….after that you never spoke to me again. I was heartbroken because all I ever wanted was to impress you by doing what you couldn’t. I could no longer face you knowing you wouldn’t accept me so I left Ponyville and joined the equestrian army. Soon after I was discharged, yet again for my ability to connect with dragons and I was left alone, unable to come home for the fear of another rejection and unable to go anywhere else because of the fear of my powers.”
(From black, a mountain range comes in view, and an older Daraqus, clothed in black armor, uses his now broken horn to raise a castle out of the stones on the mountains, all ranging from huge, hulking boulders to the smallest of pebbles. He, then, after his castle is complete, he calls several dragons to him and he turns to a window looking over the town of Ponyville)
Narrator: “…..now I have figured out how to make you love me, my dear fluttershy, I know now that in order for someone to love you, you have to make them fear you. I have come back for you fluttershy and will not leave again without you by my side or all of equestria will bow to my will until you do”
(The image turns around to Daraqus standing on a cliff over the town with an army of dragons at his back. His horn glows again, only this time to order his army to attack the town, and to search for the one pony that broke his heart so long ago)