Story number 3- mostly dialogue and first time trying to evoke sadness

Story number three is almost ready to be published, I need to proof read (3 times) and make sure I'm happy with it.

This is mostly an experimentation with a 90% dialogue story, and I'm trying to create some genuine sadness between my characters. It's the first time I've tried emotional writing, so hopefully it won't suck. Too much, anyway.

See you when story 4 comes out. =)

In other news, I have a side project going on. I'm keeping it under wraps (mostly, ask and you shall be informed), but it's interesting to say the least...