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Twilicorn


I'm a lazy writer who loves what I do, but is too lazy to write half the time. If you have an idea for a story, shoot it at me though. I just might take it♥

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  • 433 weeks
    Hey Everyone!

    I've been gone for... well, years. And I'm not sure how many of my followers are still around. How is everyone? What's changed?

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  • 561 weeks
    New Story!

    It'll be out soon... it's short, and tagged "complete" even though it's not. It can't really be complete until I fix some things with my ex-special somepony, but it really helped me process. Just some AppleDash, nothing special, but give it a read? Offer some constructive criticism? I love y'all♥

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  • 561 weeks
    Taking Suggestions for New Story

    Goddamn it, I need to write. Give me ideas, give me characters, and give me a target word count. I need ideas, because my muse hopped on the nearest train going anywhere. As did my brief love life. God, I'm fricking lovesick. Have you ever broken up with someone and regretted it like hell? Yeah, idiot who did that right. Fricking. Here.

    So. Um. Ideas? Please?

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  • 575 weeks
    Rewriting Patient—Thoughts, Comments?

    I've been rereading Patient so I could add the next chapter, and when I was, I realized how poorly it was written. I have been thinking for a while, and I decided that the only real option is to rewrite it.

    Longer chapters, better explanations, so on and so forth. Thoughts and ideas can go below.

    I'd be deleting the current story and completely starting from scratch.

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  • 580 weeks
    Idea for a tumblr, seeking feedback.

    So… what happens? It’s a funny story.

    Sweetie Belle is an orphan.

    First post:

    I wasn’t always like this.

    So screwed up. Drunk more often than anypony should be, high every once in a while, pregnant.

    Yes, pregnant. I’ve made choices I wouldn’t wish on anypony else.

    I’ll start from the beginning. It was just six months ago. Can you believe that?

    Just six months…

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Idea for a tumblr, seeking feedback. · 4:40am Mar 10th, 2013

So… what happens? It’s a funny story.

Sweetie Belle is an orphan.

First post:

I wasn’t always like this.

So screwed up. Drunk more often than anypony should be, high every once in a while, pregnant.

Yes, pregnant. I’ve made choices I wouldn’t wish on anypony else.

I’ll start from the beginning. It was just six months ago. Can you believe that?

Just six months…


So what was six months ago? A fire. A fire that started from a dragon, completely unintentionally. Just a dragon out for a snooze, a little too close. The fire was everywhere. When Rarity told her to run, she did, and Rarity, Sweetie Belle’s family, and anypony else she could have been sent to. Sweetie Belle was sent to Ponyville Orphanage. A rundown place, where only a very few others were. Those beyond saving, as some would say. The disable, the mental. She was the only normal one, but it was a nightmare there.

Abuse. Between the forced cleaning, forbiddances of magic or flying, the beatings, denial of food, lack of running water, and general yellings-at, Sweetie Belle broke. She ran away, like so many others would, and never returned.

Frustrated, she went for a walk. She didn’t know the orphanage was on the bad side of town. She didn’t know that a shop called “Apple Cider” would sell hard apple cider. She didn’t know that this was the one place that sold to minors, if you knew how to get it. Sweetie Belle didn’t, but she got it somehow. ((Maybe walk in, sit on a certain stool, and just ask for “the lowest, cheapest cider y’gots.”)) Several glasses later, she’s kicked out, where she collapses in an alley, drunk off her flank.

She’s found by the wrong kind of crowd, and becomes introduced to drugs with the promise it’ll make her headache go away. Yay, naïve Sweetie Belle! She becomes addicted, and begins working at Apple Cider to make some cash. She’s still homeless, sleeping in the same alley in a cozy box. All her money goes to drugs or alcohol, though when her boss finds out she’s a druggie, he wises her up. She decides to quit drugs, but her alcohol addiction persists until he tells her the dangers of that as well. He becomes her “street mentor,” teaching her what she needs to know.

Until she’s… attacked in her cardboard box. Afraid, she goes to Ponyville Hospital, where she’s treated for a variety of things. Despite this, she continues drinking until a month or two later, when she returns for a follow-up and learns she’s preggers. She’s forced into rehab, lying about her current living standards, and slowly gets out of her addictions. She still is pregnant though, and she has to make the tough choices.

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