Existing Chapters of Eclipse Updated! · 5:28am Mar 8th, 2013
Just a short Update.
The Prologue and all three parts of Chapter One are updated. I have ground thought them with a finetoothed comb and, in addition to correcting quite a few tiny format mistakes pointed out by the EqD prereaders, I have simplified the names addressed throughout the existing story to date.
HOPEFULLY this will allow those of you who were having trouble keeping track of characters to have a more enjoyable, coherent experience! I took a page from the Writing workshop at Las Pegasus Unicon and simplified the addressing of names as opposed to "Lavender Unicorn Syndrome" Which I think will help.
Thank you SO MUCH for your patience!
-Spectre
P.S.-
Chapter 2.1: Rough Draft 60% complete!
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.
I should be able to take a look over spring break.