Mar
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2012
Spitfire X Soarin' · 5:40pm Mar 12th, 2012
After going through and writing the requests for clops I've received. I think I'll focus a little more on actual canon character clopfics. The first of what might be a few will be a Spitfire X Soarin' clopfic. Hope that goes well and I'll probably be recognised a 'lil more :P I want to get better at what I enjoy doing, and improve my writing talent!
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Your stories are quite terrible.
34792 how so?
Just mindless and uninteresting. Your stories lack and solid base to build upon, it's like reading a Twilight novel.
34798 Well they're mostly erotic clopfics meaning the sex is more important. What else do you expect? I'm not gonna write about two couples meeting one day, and getting into some soppy romantic relationship before the good part comes. I'm not that sort of writer. Oh well this place fails to see that, sometimes I wonder why I even post here
Maybe you shouldn't? I mean no offense, but I hate seeing this smut everywhere.
34907 I guess it isn't to everyone's taste!
Not smut as in shipping, but smut as in terribly conceived writing. You are terrible.
37042 Terribly conceived how?
Are you talking about the plot?
I'm talking about your writing style in general, it's hard to pay attention. It's like seven year old writing a story about dicks and vagina.
37054 Well if you don't like clopfics, why read them?
Slow down, Hitler, I can read whatever I want because I LIKE reading. If I like something, I read it; if I don't like something, i'll still read it. I'm a reviewer and I rate stories across the site.
37059 Well your reviews don't seem very constructive. They sound more offensive if you ask me.
I'm not trying to offend you unless you think what i'm saying is true. Do you think your stories are well thought out and well written?
37068 No story is perfect and I have my flaws. But from what I've heard from a majority of readers from other sites, they love them!
And I do try to improve with grammar and vocabulary but just end up on a plateau, due to lack of anyone giving constructive feedback other than "needs more/less commas."
Majority of your readers are you friends who will compliment you so you don't get offended. Same goes with every story on this site and everyone.
37076 Some of them have actually told me truthfully that they love them. Also I've had non-friends read them and they enjoy them too!
That's the brony community for you, they will love anything pony related so don't get your hopes up. Have you seen any negative responses to anything you've read on this site?
37100 Only with grammar issues. And comments where readers say the story sounds rushed.