Ok... · 3:31am Mar 2nd, 2013
When I first started out I was gung-ho writing my fic, The mixer Chronicles, but now, I just kind fell inadequate.
I've been reading a lot of other writers stories now, and all of them make mine look rather bad in one respect or another. While other writers can spice up dialogue with lots of adjectives and other ornaments, while I keep reverting back to my talking heads (though I have gotten better at that). When I look at my story it just seems to lack that something that gives it a spark, that might just be me being overcritical, but it could just as easily be the fact that I just can't write as well as some of the better writers here.
All of this could be just me knee jerk reaction to looking back on my work after reading such master pieces as Of Peace and Isolation, or it could just be me being overly critical of my own work.
Don't feel obligated to comment, this is more of just a rant, I won't stop these books till I tell my story, which at this rate is still a long way off. \
Edit: All that stuff I said above this, you can disregard, I'm a lot more confident now, plus I have a lot of views now, with 58 in one day 
Bro this I feel thee exact same way sometimes - I'm not famous as writer of "better living" or "Fallout Equestria" but i just keep trying. The reason why they spice up stories is probably due to the saying "Write prose (stories) as you would write poety". It takes alot of pratice but that how it was for everyone.
Nobody made a story (Fanfiction or not) and world rooted for him. he just kept going
If I have time I might take look at your story and help, if you wish
879644 Like I said, mostly a rant, but go ahead read the Mixer Chronicles, just forgive my format for the first nine books, I have to go do a formatting overhaul on them sometime.
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No problem