Nov
12th
2011
Abrupt Changes · 2:29am Nov 12th, 2011
Read this.
Chapter 1-5 have recently gone through a TREMENDOUS amount of changing. About 60-75% of it has been changed and/or rewritten. That's about two of three words. Anyway, I'll be deleting comments that apply mainly to the newer chapters if they occur after my divide between my first draft and my later drafts and sending you notification (if you're not a guest), since some of them may no longer be relevant. Also, if you've read those chapters before 11/11/11, you should definitely reread them, because they are *now* excellent.
A special thanks to my editors sonic30 and Galactic for helping me get rid of the major errors. Cheers!
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