Apology · 8:17pm Mar 9th, 2012
I just want to say that the new story fell flat of my expectations. Not only that but I couldn't even see where I was going with the story. In the end I just wanted to toss it. Sorry to dissappoint but it's just the way I feel.
*ahem* AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW
28034 If I get the inspiration to continue I will. But right now I have the ultimate case of writer's block concerning where the story was going. And if I did continue writing it then it would come out halfhearted, and I don't want to write a story where I'm not excited about it. I still love the character and all that, I just didn't like how he was going to blend with the ponies.
28046 how about an accident and his body is nearly destroyed... then he has to be somehow transferred into a pony body?
28081 Maybe, but the main character becoming ponified thing is used quite a bit. And if I did transfer him into a pony body then I would be tempted to ship him with one of the mane six. Besides it isn't the plot I'm stuck on, it's the way he'll act around them. I don't want to make him too laid back or he'll seem too one dimensional. And I don't want to make him too emotional either.
28092 well then, you seem to need a balance between the 2.
28100 That was my thought and I really appreciate your suggestions. I might work on the second chapter this weekend seeing as I don't have any pressing engagements, and hopefully that will help clear my mind about the rest of the story.