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The Mystery Fluttershy Fan


*** Please consider supporting me on Patreon https://www.patreon.com/TMFF *** I used to write Clopfics, but now I prefer to read them, out loud on my Youtube channel.

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  • 147 weeks
    A new Novel Reading

    For a while now since the start of 2021, I've been getting right back into making Audiobooks, haven't announced much about it here since the beginning, but I'm super excited for the next Novel I am going to be doing a reading for.

    The Trailer itself is safe for work, but the fic isn't, XD.

    https://youtu.be/oRau4OsnyKM

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    1 comments · 341 views
  • 176 weeks
    Making Audiobooks

    6 years ago I used to make a lot of Audiobooks of mostly clopfics on my Youtube channel.

    I've decided to finally get back into it and therefore reading more stories to feature on my channel.

    Here's one I've made recently that is SFW.

    Rainbow Dash and the Ultimate Showdown of Ultimate Destiny.

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    0 comments · 271 views
  • 176 weeks
    My Little Slave... The Comic?

    Hi everypony, I've been away for a long time.

    An offer someone made last year has re-sparked a bit of enthusiasm back in me toward MLP. There is likely going to be a comic based on My Little Slave and I have been sent the cover of it as a teaser.

    Click Here

    Ominous

    Who's looking forward to it?

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    5 comments · 715 views
  • 506 weeks
    Almost Horse Famous.

    I am quite taken aback by how popular my clopfic My Little Slave has become. I sure did not expect it to become the 7th most viewed clopfic. See for yourself.

    It also nearly has half the the views of the fic in no.1 which is Princess Molestia.

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    2 comments · 772 views
  • 507 weeks
    My Little Slave: The Sequel!!!

    Nah not really :P

    But I thought that might get your attention. But if you were a fan of that story then I am writing another one like it. I'm calling it 'My Little Appleslave'.

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Feb
17th
2013

My thoughts on the Finale. I found it inspirational. · 3:53am Feb 17th, 2013

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I have mixed feelings about the episode. I really liked the initial premise and the 'Destiny song' It was really funny to see the characters trying to do each others jobs and as each of them went back to normal I couldn't help but smile and felt like a really fun look back at these characters we have grown to love and what make each of them unique and interesting

However I think that should have been the plot for the whole episode. Or at least the first of a two parter. Twilight's transformation into a Alicorn felt sudden and hardly relevant. Then I started to cringe at seeing what was essentially flashbacks of the show to date. This was done terribly and felt more like I was watching a advertisement for the very show I was watching. The way the flashbacks were shown was boring and looked like something an amateur video editor would put together. It's been done better before. In the discord episode they showed flashbacks in a sentimental and quick fashion that made sense, I always kinda wished they did it for more then just Twilight and Applejack. But hence that would have taken away from other cool scenes in that episode.

The episode went downhill after that The reason for why Twilight became a Alicorn felt cheesy and it felt more like I was watching a show for little girls then it ever had before. Also of the 5 or 6 songs that were in the episode I only liked the Destiny one at the start. Please Celestia, never sing again.

So basically I will give the first half of the episode a 8/10. It would be one of my favourite moments in the entire show since season 1. Then the second half I would give a 3/10, it just became so flat and I stopped caring, until my disappointment that I will have to wait until next season to see just how Twilight being a princess will effect the show.

But that was well played Studio B, I am going to be waiting for the next season with a lot of enthusiasm.

So I guess my review balances out to a 5/10. Since it was awesome and awful at the same time within only 22 minutes.

Unlike most game reviews though a 5/10 does not mean I hated it, It means that I thought it was meh... average.

Copy paste of a review I wrote, but after watching it a second time I decided to add this.

I saw the episode again while I was picking out bits for a best of season compilation video and in retrospect the bad parts of the finale are shorter then the good parts and I've decided that all the songs pre-aliicorn were awesome. So I have decided to raise my rating to 6.5/10.

I got a great fic idea from this episode. Because the shoved in Alicorn crap, the main focus of the episode, the cutie mark swaps weren't as explored as I wanted them to be. So I think I will start writing a fic, involving a short story each chapter about each pony trying to cope with having the wrong cutie marks.

I'm sorry to those who are waiting on my other stories, but I want to start writing this and see if it works out, because I think it will be fun to write. Whereas some of my other stories are starting to feel like work.

Comments ( 5 )

I need to sleep on it, but i see where your coming from.

rainbow with Rarity's cutie mark makes her G3 Rainbow Dash. also i feel like this episode is going to grow on us.

also i would give the episode 6/10 for songs. Do you know how hard it is to tell a story in song form!

Please Celestia, never sing again.

I thought I trusted you:fluttercry: that song was fantastic.

Celestia sings good

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