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Rustic_King


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  • 334 weeks
    new story in the making

    I'm writing a new story based on a few pics by Arareroll. This is what I've got so far. Warning: will contain Pony on Human femdom etc.



    Prologue

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  • 357 weeks
    But wait, there's more!

    After much thought, I have decided to continue my story: A Winter wonderland.

    I don't know if I'll add more chapters*, or make a separate story as of yet. But I do have a few ideas as to the plot of those chapters. I even have titles in mind.

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  • 361 weeks
    My next story

    Today i finished my story “A Winter wonderland” at a short 18k + words.
    I’m going to try and make my next story a lot longer than that and return to a more dialogue centred format, as most people didn’t seem to like the format I used last time.

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  • 362 weeks
    It's my Birthday!

    Well it will be on Thursday! As a gift, I'll try and have the next chapter of A Winter wonderland out on the day itself!

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  • 366 weeks
    Writing the next chapter this afternoon/evening!

    I already have the next chapter written out in my head (and some of the next too! Normal service has been resumed.

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Feb
16th
2013

My reaction to the season three finale · 11:12pm Feb 16th, 2013

As much as I enjoyed the music, it really was a lift in quality (plus Celestia singing!) the whole episode seemed like what is termed an "ass pull" from the start. Really, the episode hinges on Twilight making an elementary mistake in magic - reading a half-finished spell aloud. Seriously, that is a fairly standard magical rule - you never read a spell that is half written out loud or that you don't know the effects of. Star Swirls spell fits both those categories. (see below)

I don't think someone who makes such a simple mistake is ready to be a princess. It felt rushed, and the ending was so convoluted and rather nonsensical. Also, now you're going to have fanfic writers doing self inserts where they turn into ponies. They'll point to this and say "See? Celestia has the power to change a ponies race, so she can change someone's' species!" It is plain the writers were doing their best not to make this suck too bad, but given the requests (demands?) of Hasbro they didn't have much to work with.

I'm hoping against hope, that someone at Hasbro realises that they've stuffed up and redacts this somehow - perhaps by Twilight saying she doesn't want to be a princess any more. And now that I think on it, she doesn't look like the other Alicorns at all, no longer horn or increase in height - she's the same but with wings. So maybe she isn't a true Alicorn, but was given wings as a visual shorthand for "Twilight is a princess."? As much as I love Twilight, the whole "princess Twilight" thing makes no sense to me. In the words of Captain Jack Sparrow, "They're just giving the bloody title away now."

Also the five that had their cutie marks swapped plainly felt ill at ease with their "destiny" as depicted by their cutie marks, so why did they not try something else - as we saw, they plainly still had their previous skills. And what exactly is the spell supposed to do? It makes no mention of turning into an Alicorn, To be honest, it mostly sounds like bad poetry.

Still, I look forward to the rumoured movie and season 4.

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Comments ( 1 )

I just downloaded it.
I still have to finish seasons 1 & 2 and catch up on plenty a lot a metric fuck-ton of things I missed, if I ever want to continue writing here (and get my canon right). I guess I'm not a true Brony :fluttercry:

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