Brand New Prologue · 10:08pm Mar 7th, 2012
Due to criticism to my prologue for my seven little sins series "Rainbow Dash Resurrection" growing so intense, I decide to rewrite it completely from scratch. It was the first fiction I wrote in over a year, and it's too much effort to try and go back and fix everything about it. I wrote "Cupcakes Ex-Machina" in hopes that it would be considered ten times better, and draw in readers to finally read the epic tale I've written.
Also, I noticed that the particular way I humanized the characters was drawing a lot of raised eyebrows, so I'm going to edit the characters to be anthropomorphic (furry). They were already humanized, not changing that, but making them humanoid ponies will be easier to comprehend and more appealing for some. Even though I originally didn't like them in this regard (despite being a fur fan myself) it's grown on me a little and I hope my readers can enjoy them in this regard.
I'd also like to apologize for having nothing new for the past week. A desire to relax with my friends and lover more, as well as depression over this particular series receiving not nearly as much attention as it deserves, lead to a long pause in my fictions. I'll try an remedy that over the next few days with a couple of the discorded fiction I promised you all. Until then, read my new prologue, read seven sins, and look forward to more in the near future! ^w^