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LysanderasD


For them, a dream. Like thousands of other dreams. For you, a story. Like thousands of other stories.

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  • 158 weeks
    Side B: A New Leaf

    Thanks to a piece I published last week called Your Faithful Disciple, I happened to be put in the feature box for the first time since joining the site, which happened at this point very close to a decade ago. In that time, I’ve put out only a handful of stories, many of which sit unfinished. But being featured inevitably attracts attention—attention for which I am grateful, and which has

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  • 211 weeks
    Someone Else's Story

    This blog post is long overdue, and I apologize.

    So over the course of approximately four years, I've managed to put out what amounts to four chapters to Someone Else's Sun. On average, that's a chapter a year, give or take. So I'm not the most prolific of writers; my attention gets pulled elsewhere, and, frankly, my talents are better spent working on others' stories than writing my own.

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  • 563 weeks
    Groups

    Maybe I'm idealistic, but it frustrates me how kneejerk reactions destroy friendships, destroy relationships, destroy groups.

    For those who know what I'm talking about, no, the group wasn't destroyed so much as temporarily inconvenienced, but the root of the problem is the same.

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  • 587 weeks
    Life Sucks

    ...for many reasons, as I think many of us can attest.

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  • 601 weeks
    I feel I should warn you

    or rather, those of you that look, at least, that there is a story incoming.

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Feb
7th
2013

Life Sucks · 12:20am Feb 7th, 2013

...for many reasons, as I think many of us can attest.

Most relevant to you, however, is that it has been, for varying reasons, interfering with my ability to write. I have had a one shot in the works for no less than two weeks, an affair that should have taken a little over a day. Nevertheless, it is currently sitting at approximately 3000 words and about, oh, 70% done, or a little more. I would much prefer to admit I had the finished product for you now, but that, simply is not the case; nor will I have time over the next several days to put in so much as a word towards it.

Alas, I found myself unable to tell this particular tale without dialogue. I am hoping that you find the finished product satisfying nonetheless.

Why do I bring this up? Because now those of you who all favorited Silence and Motion can beat me over the head with it until I've gotten it done... though do please wait until Monday at the earliest, because real life has me by the throat until then.

A snippet to hold you over.


The voice came at approximately the same time as the insistent knocking on the door, and the shock made Octavia draw the bow across the strings in entirely the wrong way. A discordant screech filled the living room, seeming at odds with the relaxed warmth of the sun in the window, just beginning to set. She very nearly lost her balance, but found it long enough to set cello and bow down gently before making her way toward the apartment’s front door.

“Tavi?” came Vinyl’s voice again, only slightly muffled. Octavia paused as she reached her welcome mat, biting her tongue and staring daggers at the door handle.

“Tavi, everything okay? I heard that.” Another little staccato series of knocks. “I know you’re in there, come on, open the door.”

Octavia shrugged and rolled her eyes.

“Octavia Philharmonica van Clef,” declared Vinyl, though the grandiose tone she used was ruined somewhat by the fact that there was a door between the two of them, “if you don’t open this door right now, I’ll... Actually, hang on, I’ve got a key. Let me see...”

Octavia waited until she heard the key enter the lock, and then, very suddenly, pulled open the door. She had anticipated, rather correctly, that Vinyl, being very physical for a unicorn, would have leaned against the door to push it open, and the end result was a pile of pale, off-white unicorn, complete with frumpled green hoodie, blue mane all tangled and scattered, fallen face first on her floor...

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Comments ( 1 )

Okay, okay, this is scary. No, like, it's freaking me out.

I wrote a story and posted it to DA a little over a year ago now, and it follows almost this exact scene perfectly. Albeit the writing sure is different, but the events are nearly the same, right down to Vinyl falling inside.

I don't know about you, but that's just one crazy coincidence.

Anyway, I really like the sound of this story so far. Very well done from the snippet you gave. It does suck to hear about life interfering, but hey, that happens to all of us eventually. The best I can do is ride it out with you, and offer you both my patience and well wishes.

I'll be waiting eagerly for this story, so good luck and, most importantly, have fun.

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