Guh....

Ok so I was not expecting how long my next chapter would be I think I may have to spread it. Two chapters at least may be a better choice, I'm just not sure I'm happy with the first half of it at all so we'll have to see if that even becomes necessary. I'm barely making any progress with what I'm saying it doesn't really establish anything nor does it seem all that interesting. I wish I had a firmer conception of what I want magic to work like but that's not what I'm writing about so going into a magic lecture would be counter productive even if I had one prepared. I'm really trying to establish the magical strength and prowess of Luna and our guest but aside from that it's not all that interesting. I need to tighten it up or do something to make it more interesting or I'm just going to have to tear 2 wall of text paragraphs right out of the middle of the story.

This might come down to how I want to write this story. I perceive it as a mix of West Wing and Buffy (in a way) in My Little Pony, and I just don't know that what I've written would ever work in that sort of piece I think I also really like what's happening but the writing let's it down.... We'll see what the hell happens.

See you space pony.....