Hey guys! I need prereaders!

So any of you people who follow me or Reconciliation, well I want this to be really good cuz I plan on submitting it to EQD. I just need people to point out any problems they find, i don't care if you think its rude. Things like grammar, awkward sentences, or plot flaws are welcome. With help I may be able to get this story among the good ones. just drop a comment about it on the story. Have fun and more updates are coming!