OR 1.5: Well, It's Better Than Nothing, Right? · 12:23am Jan 14th, 2013
Come one, come all! Everyone who liked OR the first time, you might be interested to find that in an attempt to reintegrate myself into the story's flow, I've gone back over chapter one - and found that it could have been better. Resultingly, I've finally gotten around to giving it some fixing-up, and occasionally completely overhauling certain paragraphs. So indeed, if you have some time and can spare the interest, give it another read-through, and let me know if the changes have improved the piece!
I will later. Right now, animating. I also replied to you on dA.
709590 Sounds good, and okay.