Jan
11th
2013
Unity Update · 9:19am Jan 11th, 2013
Okay, so I lied. Said I would not edit anything on Unity once posted, and I just ate my own words. I took some suggestions from Gwenio to heart, and removed the prologue. Instead, I incorporated tiny little bits of the original Prologue into the first chapter to add a bit of suspense, but not giving too much away. I found myself agreeing with a few readers, and decided the Prologue practically killed any sort of suspense or curiosity (to the outside viewer, anyway.)
Chapter 2 is up and contains entirely new content.
After this, no more changes once published. If I do, I shall have to break my fingers.
Also, sorry for the new chapter alerts-- it refused to let me edit chapters unless I removed the published status for them.
Cheers.
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