New ideas and stories

Hi every pony

I have been writing a new story but am going to post the first 2 chapters in one go as they inter-connect
It is HiE, Dark, and tragedy so I hope you will like it

And I am also thinking of ideas and want no help but feedback on whether it is a good idea

It is a story on
Sweetie Belle
And Apple Bloom
Going back to discards imprisoned statue after realising they set him free and he is released and begins to trick and enslave them using them as his minions but with many MANY twists.

Tell me if that sounds any good, I'm writing this post as I just came up with the idea and can't really explain it well

Comments

[Blackmagic115]

seems like an alright idea, I'd be happy to give you some tips if need be

[Felix_Xander]

Thank you good sir hahahalol iwillask for help if I really need it, actually... An oc would be nicety have buti would likes friends... If you would like to give me one I would gladly use him/her