My forthcoming HiE story which will feature "clop".

I'm currently writing my first HiE story to feature human and pony physical intimacy.
It's based on the on the wonderful "Gentlemen for Mares" stories by Demon Eyes Laharl.
I envision this particular story like a siege. There's a wall made of things like the weather, writers block and lack of energy.
But by firing every word, every sentence I'm creating a breach, and will eventually cause a total collapse.
Once that's done there it will be my story.
They way I put a story together is interesting. I build the bare bones first, and then add the muscles and organs. (more plot & dialogue) Finally I add the skin and hair.(editing)
If anyone can help with the editing/proofing stage you'll be my best friend forever!