The Rise Begins...

...Upon the release of the story, I have learned many things.

I think I can utilize these blogs as a kind of accountability check.

Worldbuilding phases must commence, quickly, I think that's a major issue, confusion will be dealt with and the world shall be explained.

I think grammar I got down pretty well, but overall, there are things I need to improve upon, such as imagery, quite difficult.

Also, it took me about twelve days to write seven thousand words, gotta improve upon that, and fast, as such a story that required the articulation of an entire world must be fleshed out quickly. I need to, like Star Wars, set the mood, and rapidly within the first section give people a rough view of the environment, the tone of the story, etc to keep the people engaged.

Wow, even if no one sees this, writing out the vision for at least the early part of this book gets me thinking of stuff faster...