The rewrite of chapter 4 - Serenity Sunrise Shimmer - is out!

With apologies to those who read the original and were perhaps disappointed. The updated and rewritten chapter was dropped yesterday, with a much more authentic pacing and presence, and less like a Telemundo Daytime Special.

Meet the Shimmers (well she's still a Parker - this is going to be a slow roll on their developing relationship), Parents of Shimmer (and by extension her twin sister now in a different... place).

Miss Serenity Sunrise Parker, 3 months pregnant with her daughter Shimmer and quite proud of it.

And the man she will one day call "Dad", Junior Cheif Harlan Everfree Shimmer, with his usual grin.