Taking a Break This Week From Tuesday Writing · 1:36am January 24th
Okay, so I decided to take a break from my writing this week. At least for one story. This will mean that the next chapter of Element of Balance will not be coming out for another two weeks unfortunately. But I did manage to brainstorm a plan for developing the characters that serve as Fire Sword's guards and servants. Here is a list of them below. Let me know what you think I can do for expansions if you have any suggestions.
Guards:
Earth Ponies:
Vine Archer: Earth Pony, Archery, Commander of the Flame Guard.
Hoofrunner: Jogger, fan of the Earth Speeders, an Earth Pony running group equivalent to the Wonderbolts. From Manehattan and won athletic prizes there before moving to Canterlot to live a soldiers life.
Unicorns:
Silver Javelin: Silver Unicorn with Javelin Cutie Mark,Likes jousting, wants to be the one in command, thinks unicorns are better. Grew up inCanterlot. Has a rivalry with Vine Archer.
Arcaneo Chef: A guard who doubles as the tower Chef with his skill in magic and cooking. Loves cooking and magic, has a cutie mark of a shining chef's knife. From Canterlot, went to Celestia's school a couple years before Fire and spent some time in the royal kitchens.
Pegasus:
Feather Falls: Skydiving Pegasus.
Axe Eagleye: Pegasus with an Axe who is very sharp eyed.
Servants: (4)
Gardener (Grand Garden), Earth Pony who likes gardening and develops a crush on Applejack.
Housekeepers (2 Maids, Maria and Anya), Unicorn and Earth Pony Twins that wear black maid outfits and are in relationships with Silver and Vine. They clean and serve dishes at meal times.
Strong Stuff: Muscular Red Earth Pony with brown mane and a cutie mark of weights who handles heavy lifting.
We'll see how I incorporate this into the next chapter which should come out on the 6th of February. I will also be taking a vacation on the weekend of the 16th through the 18th so that will cause me to delay the chapter afterwards as well. But thankfully come around early March I will have completed my Guilt After the Apologies Stories as well as my Pokémon one. That will allow me to get a chapter out for Element of Balance and my KOTOR fanfic every week. So please be patient, and offer whatever suggestions you have for the characters or future episodes/chapters in Element of Balance.
I can imagine the Chef's name: Swift Cuisine, a pegasus able to use his wings to cook.
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Hmm. That could be a good one if I want to make equal numbers. Maybe the other one can be his co chef.
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yep