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Mpony1


I am but a simple brony who loves everything My little pony FIM

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  • 1 week
    Ending changed for Flurry’s Favorite Guard (HISHE)

    To help figure out a perfect way to start the next chapter, I tweak the ending to 1st chapter a little.

    It's nothing major or over the top, but It helps me finally figure out a proper way to start chapter 2.

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  • 2 weeks
    A chapter for Sunset's Special Detention will be taken down for re-editng

    This is something that I had been meaning to do for a while now.

    The main thing being re-edited is Celestia's and Luna's trip to the sex shop. Not the whole thing, but just before they leave.

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    1 comments · 129 views
  • 6 weeks
    More NEWS for: OBJECTION

    As mentioned in my last blog post, I will be making changes and additions to the previous three chapters. Originally the additions were minor and did not change things too much going forward, it was just supposed to help chapter 4 make sense. But now the changes are going to be bigger than I planned, as the new additions will change the timeline of the events we have seen so far. (Excluding the

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  • 6 weeks
    More NEWS for: OBJECTION

    As mentioned in my last blog post, I will be making changes and additions to the previous three chapters. Originally the additions were minor and did not change things too much going forward, it was just supposed to help chapter 4 make sense. But now the changes are going to be bigger than I planned, as the new additions will change the timeline of the events we have seen so far. (Excluding the

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  • 6 weeks
    NEWS FOR: OBJECTION

    I been having a bit of writers block with this story, mainly because I need to make some changes.

    Nothing over the top, I just need to a bit of re-editing for the previous chapters. I'm just taking some things out while adding new scenes. Like I said its nothing to big, just a way to help make the next chapter make sense.

    I will let you know when the changes are made.

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Jan
22nd
2024

NEWS FOR: A Debt that will be repaid · 2:26am January 22nd

After 2 long years I'm finally getting back into this story. Now that I'm out of my rut. I plan to finish it.

Before I post the next chapter. I plan on re-editing the first. Its nothing major, I just need to remove a plot point I started.

The plot was that Celestia had been manipulating every major villain attack. Like nightmare moon's. Nightmare was actually supposed to be Luna pretending to be evil.

I had plans to expand this idea, but I realized it contradicts what Tempest said in the first book by the original author. So, to keep things simple and in sync with the first book. I'm scrapping that idea entirely.

All villain attacks will remain real, and the focus will solely be on the debt issue.

So, anything in the first chapter mentioning Celestia manipulating events will be removed and repurposed. I will start the re-editing tomorrow as well as continue chapter 2.

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Comments ( 3 )

Cool, I have been looking forward to this.

I read this a while back, but it seems to be gone. What happened?

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I took it down because I needed to make the necessary changes to chapter one, so that future chapters don't contradict each other.

I long since finish that, but I wanted to wait until after I finish chapter 2, before putting the story back up, just in case I need to make more changes.

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