A Turn For the Better

Hey there everypony! I have some good news and some bad news... The good news is that my grades at school have skyrocketed and are sitting very well where they are right now, which in turn make parents, happy, which also in turn, gives me a bit more leniency on my privileges, sadly, they don't want me typing, I am still typing at least 30 - 45 minutes at school when I get my ideas. The bad news however, is that the story is still on hiatus, sad I know... BUT reading your comments surreptitiously throughout the day have given me some motivation, a lot in fact, I am going to try and change the view of the story from now on, trying to keep it in first person is difficult, and provides me with little detail and 'meat' to my story, changing the view of the story will give me a chance to use some dramatic irony later on. Besides that I am still typing for all of you, and I really appreciate all of the comments I've received, and when I saw that my story broke the one thousand view mark I was ecstatic about it, I didn't think that I would ever hit it this high. So again thanks to all of you who have followed my story and for those who have added to the discussion, any questions or comments you can put in the comments section and I'll try and answer any if you have any, thanks and I'll see you around!