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Black--Soul


German , Trying to write something worth while. Everyone start small after all. Enjoy the Story fellow Bronys (^///-///^)/)

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  • 1 week
    Cynder story gain more pony words

    15.000 words for my Cynder story. Massiv inspiration I got over the last two days, writing in between working and studying.
    Unfortunately proofreading will be hell.
    Can't even usually relay on Google docs at the first 2-3 read though because it has a tendency to change words and ruine sentences.

    Anyway I will indeed step back from Fimfiction for at least a week.

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  • 2 weeks
    General update,Little free time

    When I don’t study for my new job that seem to not move along, I de-stress with writing stuff on my Fimfiction stories.
    Currently I write a little here or there, but I feel like I get nowhere.

    I tried the last 5 weeks to work on my Selene story, but I don’t like what I come up with and have to contemplate its next chapter.

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  • 6 weeks
    Really bad news, request for help!

    There was a error in the editing of the chapter 7 of my Marksaline story.
    The result was losing the chapter content.
    Has anyone a copy of my Marksaline story stored somewhere?!
    Otherwise the chapter 7 is lost...

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  • 7 weeks
    I am in a naughty mood~β™‘

    The titel already giving you hopes?
    Time to continue the Changeling Empress adventure.
    Some clop, tons of proofreading, continuation of the storyline.
    Also I see i just made 1 update 2023 for that story.
    Really wasted that year working to hard...

    Anyway...

    I proofreading recently alot of my stories, fixed a lot of typos even after years... :facehoof:

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  • 7 weeks
    Update and accidentally publishing

    Chapter special:
    Pantyhose Warrior - 'The Bad Dragon' is a Breezee?

    The over 7000 word chapter isn't done, I miss clicking. The editing button is still without space beside the publishing one :facehoof:

    Mostly proofreading and some line I have to change up near the end. Probably editing some humor in as well.

    Perhaps done in a hour. We shall see.

    Stay snuggly :pinkiesmile:πŸ‘

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Jan
14th
2024

Good news · 7:19am January 14th

Imagen this happening to my last Cynder story chapter:

When I had 3% recharged and checked, only the new chapter titel was there... :fluttercry:

But hey, life is going on. And I had some funny ideas for the next chapter for my Cynder story.

Thanks Fimfiction comment sections of different stories I read to de-stress giving me ideas:

Awesome.

Anyway so far I am 2000 words into the next Cynder chapter and will introduce the filly mane 6 after the Rainbow Dash incident known as rain boom of flight school.

Also you will probably like to learn to hate the Tree of Harmony, not just from my Marksaline story but here as well. Though a lot less in scale.

Thanks for some if my readers to cheer me up and the comments section of Fimfiction to give me insane ideas.
Sanity is overrated :derpytongue2:

Question... Would someone like Derpy Hooves as lover of Dr Who Time Turner or maybe Luna?
Just a absolutely unrelated question out of the blue...


Stay snuggly everyony :twilightsmile:β™‘

Additional questions, what would you think of something like that for my Cynder story?
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Abesinian Pantyhose Warrior side character maybe villain, because I read a funny story that inspired it.

And:

Plot twist:
Remember the episode of the bunny stampede in canon?
That was a hint of Fluttershy super secret bunny army for Equestria protection!
And Spike find it out with Cynder by themself!
If Fluttershy send out her super secret rabbit army her supreme general Angel Bunny has been breeding into existance for years the [place enemy army here] having declaring wars are taken down hard!
The for example Yeti King campaign might yet be stopped!
The enemy will be overrun by a storm of cute white, but deadly bunnies :yay:♀
It's like the clone wars, just without clones, but still a army of white heros to come to everycreatures help :rainbowdetermined2:πŸ‘
We might have to scale up the sharp butter knife production to keep up with the troop production though... :derpytongue2:
It is a Butterknife for Spike, Cynder and Ponies, but a dagger or short sword for a bunny.
Also some leafed camo to wear, hiding entire armies in plain sight! Winter camo when naked, olive and brown camo for any other time.
Rarity would have needed to create a hole branch to make them on mass, sponsored by the crown obviously.

Good Applejack has a huge orchard, the Apples and other crop will hold a part of Fluttershy death bunny army of adorable cuteness feeded! Making the Apple- Pear family obscenely rich.

Pinkie Pie and her sisters 'good luck in war party' and 'congratulations you won the wars against [place enemy army here]' party is already in plans for a few years! But how did Pinkie Pie know?
Maybe when she played with Discord strip poker?
But are the not naked by default?
Maybe every time they lise a round of cards they need to add clothing instead?
I don't know :raritywink:

Did you know Twilight has a test by also helping with enchanted of butter knifes for years for a eventualities like this?
Luna has helped of course, why else was she so rarely in the public eye? Despite needing to relearn common sense due to almost 10.000 years isolation on the moon with Nightmare Moon.
She was to busy with the white cute bunny dead army butter knife project.
Maybe enchanting the camo as well?...
Sound reasonable :pinkiesmile:

Cadance once in offical duty has obviously already send out messages that they are hired for after the first offical conflict.
War veterans do very well for security forces with some extended training. Further do their white fur coloration makes them perfect as a hidden guard force! Once the Crystal Empire returns... Not so mutch in Griffonia.

Rainbow Dash Wonderbolts are not just stunt flying arrogant pricks, the also are military trained.
Kater having fortunately started the training of the bunny army earlier than they are expected to be ready with them.

10.000 Bunny soldiers should be ready for deployment for different main events.

That would explain why Fluttershy sanctuary budget is a multi million bit worth project... wait... I might have to change there something... anyway...

Cute killer bunny soldier for emergencies like war.
Once the war is over they can be a rebuilding force as well!
Once they all died of old age, the become emergency food rations for Griffonia!
A brilliant mastermind to have a multi purpose army like that at Equestrias disposal :trollestia:♀
All uncovered by Cynder & Spike without Discords help what so ever!

The retired bunny soldier could help PTSD veterans from other conflicts like the SPOILERS incident
Aftermath of a incident retiring guardsponis as therapy petting animals as well!
So versatile!!!

As if Celestia had not learned her lesson over the last war with [place enemy army here] to have a secret army at the ready.
Their versatility makes them a amazing work force for peace times as well!

Remember the Fruit bat incident in canon?
That would be actually Fluttershy super secret airforce...
But that is a entirely different branch of the Equestrian military, sponsored by the crown, mybe by Luna specifically?
Their Thestral guards having trained them for years.
They will be so numerous that the will blot out the sun, once they drop the bunny army as fast deployment units, giving air support afterwards!

Cadance love magic really would be well spend to raise breeding instincts with the power of the Crystal Empire, increasing the breeding rate for cute white killer bunnies and adorable killer fruit bats for many years.

It is like the movie 300... But Fluttershy is Xerxes :yay:β™‘
The God Empress Fluttershy... Discord would be so proud of her, once they become friendly acquaintances.

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