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Firesight


I'm an IT Brony who writes stories based on a show for 8-year old girls whose content is meant for anything but 8-year old girls.

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  • Friday
    Still working on Midnight Rising...

    At the rate of about 800-1000 words a day. That’s my key to getting stuff done that’s causing you issues; just be sure you put at least a little time in on it this day to have some forward momentum. The two chapters are now up to 24,100 words. I’ll work on it more this weekend, at least around continuing work around the maps and battle graphics I’m making for Feathered Hearts.

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  • 1 week
    Did two things this past weekend...

    First, I ran 10k for the first time in two months after laying off that long to let my ankle bursitis subside, trying to allow the area to generally heal up. It appears that it worked. To my delight, there was no ankle pain after and I hadn’t even lost much stamina thanks to hitting an elliptical machine twice a week for an hour instead of jogging. My upper legs are another matter, though.

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  • 1 week
    C&C chapter 40 entering prereads tonight + teaser

    Much as I didn’t want to, I made the decision to break it up since the full length of the War Council meeting had exceeded 20,000 words and will probably approach 25k for the now-two chapters before all is said and done. The breakpoint itself will be between learning about the general war situation both Aricia and the Griffon Kingdom face, and then discussing what in all the Crows they’re going

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  • 2 weeks
    Midnight Rising/C&C update: April showers may bring May flowers...

    But of more interest is the emergence of 17-year cicadas in my area. Big, ugly, red-eyed insects that are the size of your thumb but basically harmless, as long as you can get past all the shed skins they leave behind on leaves and the everpresent and disconcertly loud background sound they produce as a mating call. Fortunately, the outbreak in my area seems pretty limited. There's a few around,

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  • 3 weeks
    Midnight Rising update; Feathered Hearts C&C teaser...

    Hey, folks. Here’s my weekly writing update. I’m tagging this as C&C since that’s what the teaser below is about, but the blog is about both it and Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising.

    Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising

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Dec
11th
2023

No rest for the wicked... · 4:41pm Dec 11th, 2023

The first chapter draft for C&C is off to prereaders, weighing in at a whopping 17,775 words. So far I’ve gotten one of those prereads back with another in progress, and the initial feedback is favorable. As I’m still picking at it and slipping stuff in, it’s likely going to be approaching 19,000 or more words when all is said and done. But I don’t think I’ll reduce its size by splitting it this time. It’s a climactic chapter, so even as a clop chapter, it will be of climatic chapter length.

Nevertheless, I can’t rest on my laurels while I’m waiting for the rest of the prereads to come in. I’m charging ahead into the second chapter of the sequence in an attempt to have it ready by Christmas, now just two weeks away. There are 17,000 words already written on that, too, though they’re very choppy and that word count is unquestionably going to increase greatly—almost certainly enough to require a third chapter.

As for release schedule, I think, at this point, that I’m leaning towards saving the first chapter for when the second one is ready, so I can release them both in rapid-fire around the holidays. Hopefully it’ll be both a present and a distraction for those getting tired of company. And perhaps the third chapter can follow around New Years to add some additional fireworks to the occasion.

I admit, I’m still worried how general readership will receive this, even in its sanitized T-rated form. I know I’m taking some major chances here. I need to hear what my prereaders think about this before I make a final decision about releasing it, but I will simply reiterate again: this is basically going to be a series of Eros chapters entered into the main story for the purposes of character development, lore and worldbuilding, to say nothing of providing a resolution to the Gilda/Cipio conflict. It’s primarily about Changelings, but you’ll also learn a great deal about the backstory of such characters as Obsidian Ire and even Cipio himself, including a secret he’s been hiding for a very long time that explains some of his behavior.

And of course, all of this will be woven into some very hot and heavy M-rated action that’s heavily inspired by Unleash the Magic - Midnight Rising, using a means I’m sure readers of that story will recognize immediately. And speaking of which, be watching for a blog on that story later, as I have to issue a second mea culpa regarding the end of the last chapter and detail what I’m going to do to fix it.

Comments ( 2 )

Why rapid release? Wecan enjoy and comment more if we get more time to digest the chapters.
Your huge chapter can be remembered more easily that way as well.

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Guess I’m just trying to be in the holiday spirit by giving out multiple gifts around Xmas time? It’ll be several days, at least, before the first chapter is ready anyway. It’s big and will take time for all prereaders to get through it.

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