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  • 21 weeks
    New Chapter soon

    God, I love proof reading a 20k word chapter. I honestly shouldn't make these so long, but it helps me feel like I'm holding you all over until the next chapter drops.

    Tried to be a bit more creative with this one. Got into a groove, so it's coming out a bit faster than normal.

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  • 26 weeks
    Timelines are Bull

    I'm doing some research into parts of the timeline in mlp and each time I do, I remember how bullshit it is.

    I'm including a part with Mayor Mare in a coming chapter, but there's a few things that don't make sense time wise, and it seems that it was shoe horned in.

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  • 48 weeks
    Back in action/Question for you all

    Just so everyone's aware. I'm doing fine now. I've begun working on the next chapter.

    Now, just something I'm curious about. Where do you all think "A Broken Warrior" is heading story wise? I won't change anything based on where I want things to go (unless it's an idea I really like). I just want to see what people are expecting. Like twists, relationships, interests, the like.

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  • 51 weeks
    Short break

    Hello.

    Just being transparent, some things happened at my job, so for about two weeks, I will not be working on my fanfic.

    To make up for the sad news a bit, I am working on a side story for my fanfic. It's a diary entry type, going over specific days in Skystrike's life. First person, and nowhere near as long as my current story. Not sure when I'll have it out, but it's in progress.

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  • 54 weeks
    New chapter on Friday!

    Hello again, peoples. College has been a bitch, Was able to crank out a chapter even in the midst of finals.

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Nov
10th
2023

Timelines are Bull · 6:36am Nov 10th, 2023

I'm doing some research into parts of the timeline in mlp and each time I do, I remember how bullshit it is.

I'm including a part with Mayor Mare in a coming chapter, but there's a few things that don't make sense time wise, and it seems that it was shoe horned in.

Mayor Mare, and Cherilee went to highschool together with Shining armor and Cadence in the comics. (And before anyone says the comics aren't canon, they are, unless stated otherwise by the show.)

Mayor Mare was the officiary in the secret wedding between Bright Mac and Pear Butter. Which had to have been like, 20+ years ago, since Big Mac is the oldest, and is at least mid twenties.

This must mean that there's a HUGE age difference between Shining Armor and Twilight, or Mayor Mare is ageless.

Luckily, I can just write out that inconsistency by saying that Bright Mac and Pear Butter had Big Mac before they got married. So far, my timeline has the two "die" a few years before Season 1 starts, since I assume Applebloom is ~8 years old, and doesn't seem to remember her parents. I have half the mind to bring them back, since I don't see the point of their deaths anyway, but I'll figure it out when I get there. Would like others opinions on this part though.

I get they don't want people to think too hard on it, but I like consistency damn it.

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Comments ( 4 )

What's the name of the comic where they went to high school together?

tbh just make the story as cannon as possible then add some non con for parts in between. it's not good advice, but advice nonetheless. GL

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MLP:FIM issues 11 and 12

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I've already been deviating. it's just i go back to read again and realize how messy it is lol.

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