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  • Friday
    Thoughts on All Bottled Up

    This episode is one that I have mixed feelings about, not that it was terrible, seeing it's one where we have Starlight having issues with Trixie's behavior and bottling it up "literally" while Twilight and her friends are out doing an Escape Room. First, this episode has my favorite song from the entire show."Best friends until the end of time." It's such a fun and catchy song in a somewhat

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  • Thursday
    Thoughts on Celestial Advice

    This is the first time a Season Opener has not had some crisis in Equestria; in fact, it is more of an Epilogue to the ending of Season Six. Overall, I have some mixed feelings about this episode. It's not bad; I think it works, but I feel the impact would have been better if Season Six had been planned out better. First, the plot is about Starlight, Thorax, Discord, and Trixie getting "medals of

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  • 4 weeks
    Eight years

    I have officially been on Fimfiction for 8 years!? It doesn't even feel like it's been that long. Well, I'll probably be writing Fimfiction for another few years. Time flies, and I have to say that despite all the time it takes to write my stories, it's well worth it. I really don't plan on stopping, as this is a way to keep myself busy, and overall, I enjoy writing my crazy stories and seeing

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  • 9 weeks
    Ranking every episode in Season Six based on personal preference.

    Season 6

    1st place: Gauntlet of Fire

    2nd place: To Where and Back Again, parts 1 & 2

    3rd place: The Times are a Changeling

    4th place: The Crystalling Parts 1 & 2

    5th place: Saddle Row & Rec

    6th place: A Hearth's Warming Tail

    7th place: No Second Prances

    8th Place: Stranger than Fan Fiction

    9th Place: The Gift of the Maud Pie

    10th place: Viva Las Pegasus

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  • 9 weeks
    To Where and Back again Parts One and Two

    This is the Season Six Finale, and I have to admit this was really good as it did a fantastic job wrapping up the season's main plot points very well and gave us more world-building with the Changelings. I mainly liked how it was centered around Starlight Glimmer, as most of the episodes focused on her dealing with her past and making amends, and this was the ultimate challenge for her not to

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Oct
19th
2023

Thoughts on the Cart Before the Ponies · 8:01am Oct 19th, 2023

This episode is one I didn't care for all that much, and I'll explain why, but first, I would like to reminisce a little as this episode reminded me of something from my childhood.

The episode is about how Applejack, Rarity, and Rainbow Dash help the CMC build carts for a derby, but they take over and build the carts that they want over what the CMC wants. This reminded me of when I was a kid, a Cub Scout, and we did Pinewood Derpys, where we built these small cars made of wood and raced them down a ramp. I never cared for them, but I always did my best to make mine. But I always lost mainly because it was apparent many parents would make the cars for their kids. My dad never helped me make mine, so I always made mine by myself, which looked pretty terrible. Don't get me wrong; I didn't care that I lost every time. It was fun, and there was free pizza, which I always looked forward to. But seeing the adults in this episode get overly obsessive in a sport designed for kids made me think of my own similar experiences.

Back to the episode, the plot is straightforward, with what I stated earlier, with Applejack, Rainbow Dash, and Rarity being obsessed with a Derby that Cheerilee organized for the foals in her classroom. As the CMC went to them to help build their carts, but the older mares went with what they wanted the carts to look and ran over what the CMC wanted. Overall, it was an engaging episode with some fun moments, but I mostly felt that there wasn't a lot of agency from the CMC as they tried to get their older sisters to stop, but they were railroading them throughout the episode. Only after a crash did the three older mares realize they were wrong, and they even somewhat tried to blame the CMC for not stopping them, which kind of rubbed me the wrong way. But one thing that made this episode abit better was Cheerilee. She was so enthusiastic about the derby she dressed up in an adorable cheerleading outfit, which looked so cute. Her overall demeanor throughout the episode and making the older mares make up for ruining the first derby was excellent. She made me like the episode enough to say it wasn't that bad. In the end, I think what could've helped was maybe have her be more involved with assisting the CMC to recognize that this event was for them and help change their sisters' minds. That's all I have to say. It's not bad, but I think it could've been better.

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