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Nameless Narrator


Reading order/list is on the profile page or here.

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  • Sunday
    What next?

    I don't know if I've mentioned this in a comment or not, but I've finished "They're home." The weekly updates will continue until the end, although I'll be messing around with upload times just to show the story on the "Recently updated" front page to people visiting the site at various times. It should be roughly six more chapters. As for major events and depth of feeling, this one is more about

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  • 1 week
    Blow struck to the parasites of the gaming industry - publishers

    In the name of truth and liberty!

    I'm proud of PC gamers showing what gaming really is, not just buying proprietary console software and being happy to get a scrap of a good game once in a while. Despite all the automaton sympathizers and bug lovers defending their corporate daddy, we have finally won a battle in the long and losing war of game quality.

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    10 comments · 73 views
  • 10 weeks
    Does anyone play Darktide?

    Just curious, does anyone here play Darktide? My group kinda dissolved and it's not as fun when playing solo anymore.

    16 comments · 108 views
  • 18 weeks
    What started the drone-centric stories

    Nothing interesting this time, just two pictures that sparked my idea about hive drones in general. We haven't reached the chill Chrysalis stage yet, but who knows how things will be by book 12 or something. Anyway, the cover I made for They're Everywhere is based on pic 2, but no matter how I tried making pixelart with the right kind of feel for books 2 and 3, it kinda sucked so I stuck to

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  • 19 weeks
    Good luck, everyone, going into 2024

    So, I've been sitting in front of the screen for the good part of fifteen minutes, figuring out what to say for the now usual end of the year recap, and I've got nothing. Much like any time I try to push On Holiday forward, the empty page just laughs at me.

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Sep
27th
2023

Let's try something completely new · 7:17pm Sep 27th, 2023

I've managed to write a decent chunk of They're home and it's just sitting in my google docs.

Anyone interested in pre-reading it and doing some literary criticism?

I would upload it in full chapter chunks here and leave it accessible through unpublished view password. Genuine interest only, mainly because just reading it early really won't give you anything.

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Comments ( 5 )

Depending on how much you need criticized(word count wise) I may be interested.

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I was thinking more about gradually going through "They're home" and offering suggestions for what's unclear, what could be done better, and so on. Based on that, I'd try to fugre out if it's possible to improve and make some changes. Right now, I have chapters 2 and 3 ready, which is roughly 15k words.

I do a fair bit of proofreading, but mostly in terms of grammar, punctuation, etc. Would that be any help?

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Thanks for the offer, but probably not. I usually do grammar checks before uploading, so the unedited mess I would present now would just mean pointless extra work.

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Understandable; best of luck either way! :)

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