Let's try something completely new · 7:17pm Sep 27th, 2023
I've managed to write a decent chunk of They're home and it's just sitting in my google docs.
Anyone interested in pre-reading it and doing some literary criticism?
I would upload it in full chapter chunks here and leave it accessible through unpublished view password. Genuine interest only, mainly because just reading it early really won't give you anything.
Depending on how much you need criticized(word count wise) I may be interested.
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I was thinking more about gradually going through "They're home" and offering suggestions for what's unclear, what could be done better, and so on. Based on that, I'd try to fugre out if it's possible to improve and make some changes. Right now, I have chapters 2 and 3 ready, which is roughly 15k words.
I do a fair bit of proofreading, but mostly in terms of grammar, punctuation, etc. Would that be any help?
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Thanks for the offer, but probably not. I usually do grammar checks before uploading, so the unedited mess I would present now would just mean pointless extra work.
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Understandable; best of luck either way! :)