Overview Time (Tale of Two Sunsets) · 12:12am Aug 24th, 2023
So after getting a little feedback here and there, I've noticed that a few people have written comments regarding how they're not fond of the current direction the story's taking, nor are they fond of the supporting characters I've added. That's all fine and good, but I'm afraid such feedback is particularly vague and not really helpful at pointing at what else would need "improvement".
If you are one of those people who falls into that category, I'd like to hear what you think. I'm sure that a fair good number of you are already pretty familiar or have a solid prediction on what direction the story will soon go after I posted Chapter 65, but now I'm more curious on what you yourself would be interested in seeing, or if there's anything different you'd hope I do?
I like where the story is going. Also, tbt I don't have any complaints about where it'll go. I might be a little worried but that's normal and I'm willing to see what comes next.
No complaint on the direction of the story for me. I enjoy what it is.
I would like to see more bonding between pony sunset shimmer and princess Celestia idk about u but I think they make the perfect mother and daughter relationship other than that I enjoy this story keep at it
I like what you're doing with the plot, keep going!
I don't have any complaints, but personally, I would like to see Chestnut found and dealt with to a fitting punishment, and the whole thing with Sunset's miserable grump father resolved as well, whether he accepts his daughter back or not, Sunset has had a real parent this whole time, Princess Celestia.
I'm also concerned about those insects Human Sunset also released and when we'll see those too and if we'll ever find out where Sunset's mother is. And then maybe after all of this we could see Sunset returning to the Human World... only to be in for a rude surprise.
But I'm here for the ride. :)