My Story Name! · 9:29pm Jun 13th, 2023
I feel like the title “your mother, the princess of friendship” is a lame name. I was thinking something more different such as ‘Dawn Sparkle’ ‘Following in her hoofsteps’ or ‘another princess’ I quite like all off these and some other opinions would be nice just to see which is preferred overall! which do you prefer?
What do you wish to convey with the title? Intrigue, mystery, some humor, excitement? It’s up to you, ultimately. Current one seems to imply the focus is on Twilight. Your alternatives seem to shift focus to the offspring.
‘Another Princess’ could indicate humor or intrigue.
With the description, the addition of the character’s name, ‘Dawn Sparkle,’ could both reinforce the concept or be redundant. Might be able to combine them? ‘Dawning over her hoofsteps,’ ‘following the dawn,’ (<-these two could be slice of life) or, ‘as the dawn breaks’? (<-this one sounds potentially adventurous but also slightly alludes to the nursery rhyme ((“when the bough breaks”-rock a bye baby)) which may be cute or creepy)
Don’t know if any of this helps. Sorry.
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I never thought of combining them.Dawning over her hoofsteps sounds quite good. Ty for thinking about it.