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Nightshine Teaser · 11:09pm Apr 26th, 2023

After having more than a few drinks, Jason and Lily found themselves alone on the VIP balcony overlooking the city. Luna had been gracious to take Nightshine on a quick tour of the castle; it was nice seeing her so happy and at ease.The party below hummed with activity, and though he was getting quite tired, Lily had a vibrant energy about her that made him think she had more in mind for him later on. 

His curiosity kept him awake, nor did he want to be the first one to give in and say he wanted to go to sleep. He could tell that Lily was as competitive as he was; he was certain that she wouldn’t ever yield the game, even if it was to just prove a point. Always the gentleman, he would have to eventually give in and let her win.

He felt Lily come to rest against his right side, drawing his attention back towards her. Her warmth seeped into his fur; he felt a nervous excitement run through her like a herd of wild horses. She trembled, not from the chilly air, but from what he assumed any beautiful female had in mind after a wonderful time at a prestigious event for the elite. Lily nuzzled his neck, just underneath his chin with an earnest and genuine sense of importance. He wondered if she was marking him with her scent, proving him as hers for any who would want to think otherwise. Regardless, he enjoyed her affection, even though it made him nervous for what was soon to come. 

Lily stood up and stalked around him, her eyes locked on his. She bit his collar and tugged him to his feet, then flicked his snout with the tip of her tail as she led him back down into the Gala. “Come, Jason, I have something to show you.”

Jason gulped and followed her. Sweat grew on his brow as he tried his hardest to keep his eyes off of Lily’s rump, though he failed often. “Where are we going?” he finally asked as they started walking up a tight set of stairs. They curved up and to the left. Small candles lit the stairway. 

“You’ll see,” came Lily’s sly reply.

I'm still tweaking things here and there but this chapter is already on Patreon here. I also have four more chapters nearly done. The fifth chapter from what's currently published will end the story, too. While the rest of the story is technically mostly written, I still have to go back and flush out a lot, do a lot of editing, proofreading, and general tidying up before I can put the rest up on Patreon.

I truly hope you'll enjoy the end of this story.

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Comments ( 4 )

oh, it's done already???

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Mostly, yeah. The big pieces are all there but I have to polish a lot of it before I can put it up.

It's hard to wait patiently

I'm looking forward to seeing how the story will end, I feel very blessed to have come across your story as I really enjoyed Nightshine's personality as she's so goshdarn adorable!! :heart::heart:

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