πLast update for Cynder this month · 7:43pm Feb 17th, 2023
I will take a break for the remaining month of this story. So i can write at least one chapter to all my other stories like my Hostile Waters story and the others that have enough followers to keep me motivated.
I probably will start with finishing Cynders chapter, than contine to make the Marksaline chapter and than finally proofreading the chapters i have on Hostile Waters. Subnautica isn't going of to good, but it will get a chapter as well.
Writing chapters is fun and easy.
Proofreading really sucks the fun out of it 
Anyway...
Here is the preview to the Cynder displaced story chapter coming soon:
Cynder is 'not Spikes special somedragon'
Chapter 6 - Welcome to the Clan Welp, you are a Apple now... 3/?
By: Black--Soul
Inspired by: harlock5399
From the story: Reborn as a dragon
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"Look who's up and about, welcome home Apples" said one of the royal appointed farmers to help take care of the Apple Orchard with all coming benefits of working for the gavourment.
6 groups of eatch 5 farmer would assist the Apple Orchard of the Apple clan with their work. To be precise, 2 farmers as in Earthponys, 2 Unicorns as help to the Earthponys and one Pegasus for weather control.
To Bright Mac's and Butter Cups absolutely horrific discovery, did the hired help had their work duty on the Apple trees the wrong way around.
Instead of the Earthponys bucking the Trees and filling the enchanted boxes with Apples and the Unicorns storing them for transportation, was the Unicorns picking the Apple with their telekinesis and the Earthponys moved them to storage.
For over a week did they worked that way and contaminated all Apples they worked with. Since they managed the workload of what Bright Mac would have needed 3 months for was unfortunately the stock of compromised Apples huge.
To show the new helping hooves the difference, did Bright Mac let them all taste test one Red Delicious made the Earthponys way from picking to loading into the crate and them tasting the same with Unicorn influences.
There was indeed a different after taste after the consumption in their mouth.
Bright Mac was furious that he had a week worth of help with three months of profit that could not be sold to their usual customers.
When Celestia learned of this, did she buy all afflicted Apples through her own personal Cake fund and sold it of to the Griffons in Griffonia at 1/3 price.
The Apple clan had not lost any profit or reputation and the Griffons of Griffonia were very happy with her spontaneous generosity.
So mutch so that many poor Family's throw away their piss poor origins in their home land and immigrants started to flood Equestria of the poorest of Griffonias citizens.
While Celestia had some seriouse problems of organization to get them well enough housed, feeded and integrated into Equestria, did the additional help in working power and filling out Equestrias military ranks out, payed big time years down the line.
Funny how Harmony sometimes worked.
The Nobel Griffons of Griffonia suspected a dark ploy from the Pony nation, but their investigation simply showed that the Griffons immigrants were the lowest level of citizens they had and most of them had not more than the basic education.
In the end did the Griffonia nobility ignored this massiv migration and only years later learned how mutch they screwed themselves over losing so mutch working forces and low grade income and tax paying population.
Three weeks did it take for the Apple clan to learn in their new work force and settle into a lifestyle between half time farmer and full time filly & dragon hatchling raising low level nobility.
The Apples had since the longest time enjoyed the 5th rank of Nobel status to give them a 10% discount and selling bonus from Equestrias gavourment. With their direct service to the crown under Princess Celestias orders did they got officially raised to Nobility of the 4th rank.
A 4th rank nobel could buy stuff from the gavourment at a 20% discount but still only received only 10% bonus selling to them.
Sometime the nobels tried to change that they never received more than 10% selling to the gavourment no matter if 5th or 1th rank novels, but the economy would not be tanked by greedy individuals like some half braindead Apes.
While the Apple family of the Apple Orchard in Ponyville settle into their respective new responsibilities and their training regiment, did the Foals enjoyed more family time than ever before. The dragon hatchling was already used to being carried up and down stairs, while walking all over the house and occationaly on the Farm side by side with its sibblings.
Life was good!
Life was anything but good.
Celestia had a new stud for booty calls, but he more often than not had to be let go after ten rounds of bed gymnastic's with him having to leave the same day later to continue his duty in Ponyville, by helping to care for the dragon youngling Cynder.
At least his earth pony nature allowed him to participate the first three rounds and endure fourth to six, while surviving seven to ten.
That stud had more endurance then 10 unicorns stallions combined and twice their output when properly water and portions force-fed.
Good times... Good times...
But recently did her bodys magic was on the Fritz and the royal physician wanted to make additional test before committing to results that in his words: "Would not unnecessary stress her if unfounded." Tomorrow would she have definitely a answer for her magic i stability and her strange tasting buds malfunction.
Celestia had a bad yet somehow giddy anticipation behind this odd occurrence.
The rumors had already started to spread all over Equestria from her having some Alicorn sickness up to her being knocked up by the inofficially existence of a supposed to existing Royal Guard harem. Guess it serves her right starting that after forgetting to wipe her productiv stud eggnog from her face before ordering her bedroom champer guards to ask a maiden to ask the chef cooks to make or bake a hollow cream pie.
That sure had the maiden of the castle grounds twittering in inappropriate but accurate jokes.
Bright Mac was slowly starting to panic, he could not seem to find his little trouble makers. After they had received brand new enchanted cardboard boxes that weigh only a fraction of a wooden box, did he lost sight of the foals and the usualy easy to find hatchling.
Not only did he couldn't find them, someone was pranking him by placing three boxes of the ones with a picture of a orange, a red delicious apple and a purple grapes wine bottle near where he already searched his foals.
Instead of gloating that the Black Hoove ponies could move unseen, should they help him find the three run aways before something happens.
Meanwhile Bright Mac was continued to be followed around by 'empty cardboard boxes'...
Three black hoove agents watched in amusement and slight admiration how Bright Mac was followed around by the ones he was looking for.
The agreed that as silly as the younglings had used the Cardboard boxes, it worked as long boxes did not seem to be out of place or in a obstructing way in the room. Example: Alongside the walls and near doors while not being place as to give someone reasons to move them.
They would have to add this silly yet effective way of hiding to their arsenal.
As the apple stallion looked around and showed clear signs of distress, did two of the black hoove agents played distraction for the foals benefit and as one group was presented without cardboard boxes hiding them to the stallion.
The hug the younglings got was to mutch of a incentives to know pulling that trick once more in the future.
"Thank you for helping me finally finding them, i really started to get desperate. No matter that i know 6 black hoove agents in teams if 3 are on the orchard at all times with setrys watching the Orchards fences." He said and he froze in a shiver when he remembered how the Timberwolfs not to long ago had a drop on them...
"So you can talk sooner to me next time you find them sneaking out to play 'hide and seek', i think its understandable that at their age danger assessment isn't up to stuff..." He said.
The black hoove agents politely nodded their head in affirmation and once more dissappear into the darkness.
When Bright Mac watched them reposition, did he admitted that he never see anything like it.
Bespite being inside a well illuminated barn, did the black hoove blended into it.
One climbed a ceilling pillar and observed from there the area and everything in it. He resembeld a fruitbat in waiting.
The second one almost melded with a semi dark shadow near some of the new cardboard boxes. To Bright Mac surprised eyes did he seem to take on the color around him and become a misshaped but still fiting in object.
Clearing out a table, did one last black hoove take a sit on it. It was redicules how the assassin just sit there like a out of place picture in a empty room. When he lifted the foals of the ground and on his back with Cynder claiming the space beliw his hat, did the agent that prior had been just simply sitting on a table, dissappeard.
Something keep his eyes to bussy to avoid him from watching the point where he know to last see him sitting like a Fluffy pony in the middle of a empty room.
Yet no matter how mutch he tried to force himself, his line of sight where the assassin still had to sit, refused to acknowledge the pony in his ropes.
Butter Cup and Granny Smith were rather amused that they hear later how the three younglings manage to hide in plain sight from Bright Mac.
"Yes, I don't know how but why ever the black hooves insisted that the foals never left the barn and messing with me by reposition cardboard boxes behind me as to probably test their skill of stealthy walking around me, did i had the feeling that the three muffins on four legs vanished
into thin air. It was so bizarre..."
He said to his wife and mother.
"I am genuinely curious how the three pulled it off."
While the adults talked did the Foals and hatchling used their father as improvised warm bed to nap.
See you around everyone.
As always:
Stay snuggly β‘
See you around everyone
Cynder & Subnautica got their update.
Next are the story using Hostile Waters and my Marksaline story.
Not to forget my Selene or Gray the Necromancer update coming up
Universe 13 of the 'Draconequus Continuum' Synths Hiveship
Update is out.
Marksaline update is out now.
Selene story chapter is out now.
Writers block on Gray the Necromancer.
What i have is not bad...
But it isn't good enough...
I think i proofread some Pre-Subnautica and Marksaline until inspiration strikes...