New LTD Trailer · 8:39pm Jan 9th, 2023
Here's the newest trailer for Living the Dream. All art in this video is courtesy of Yamston
Don't spend your whole youth saving up for your old age, instead spend your youth doing what you want. Deal with the rest later. You'll be forgotten in 100 years, so might as well enjoy life now.
Here's the newest trailer for Living the Dream. All art in this video is courtesy of Yamston
Nice work dude keep up with the animation.
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Thank you!
All animations are the work of Yamston, I've just added it all together and thrown some edits over it all.
Nice animation. Now I might want check out the story.
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If you do, I must warn you; the beginning is a bit rough, and the grammar has not been fixed from its original 2012 state.
However, I can promise that if you can make it through all that, the story develops into something pretty amazing. I might be bias, but I stand behind it. (There are some very controversial topics in this story, and the beginning makes light of it all.)
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Hey I start out the same.
My story is an example of it.
You know how you can Imagine or visual what is happing but hard to describe it.
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I know exactly what you mean. Everyone starts somewhere, and this story was one of the first ones I ever wrote. XD
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Well any advice you can give me would be appreciated
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I’ll be honest, I’m bad at giving general advice.
As for visualization and putting it to paper, it’s one of those things you can do naturally or have to work at. The best way to get better is to just keep writing and listening to feed back from your readers. Good or bad, all criticism will help you improve over time.
I guess a good first step is practicing grammar and sentence structure. It’s how I did it back in the day. Trial and error. Once you’re able to put your thoughts to paper clearly, then it’ll become easier to write what you are visualizing.
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Gotcha. Well still if you want to give my story a look through if you want to.
I can link it, if you do want to see it
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I checked it out. My biggest advice is to add a space between paragraphs. It'll be a major improvement.
As for grammar, it's one of those things you'll learn as you go.
I don't like criticizing others works, because I always feel like an asshole. XD