Just a guess, shit is going down?

I like the story so far keep it up :)

Great story, can't wait to see asta meet the rest of the ponies. Can't wait for the next one!

“Um. Normal Humans can use magic Fluttershy,”

'can't', not 'can'.;)

Like this story so Far by the way i ship it

Hmmm, not a bad start so far. Let's see where this is going.

We gonna gloss over the fact that AJ just overreacted and PUNCHED this man in his temple and he responded by doing absolutely nothing?

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He saw she got hurt by this punch more than she hurt him if at all. She also immediately explained why even though it was classic woman's logic. Actually, that might be exactly the reason why he didn't react.

Not to great so far; gonna keep reading in hopes it gets better.

lol

When he left the sword on the ground I almost threw my phone to the wall, but then he explained his thought process and save my phone. Honestly so far so good. Applejacks punch was out of the blue tho.

If I'm honest, they - the princesses - could of done this differently, I mean they could have teleported Fluttershy and maybe her animals to safety, then try to capture Asta, or teleport Asta away from Fluttershy, either way their methods weren't as planned out as I imagined.

he is too friendly
im not liking the story so far

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That’s the way Asta is in the anime and Manga if you. Keep read I garuntee you he is not always like that, in this story. It has a lot to do with his ability to read people from his time as an actor and to read them with a skill he got when he became Asta

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Or actually check the situation out before deciding unknown magic must be evil

i've not seen black clover before but i know a little about the protag. honestly i'm just impressed by how good it is so far

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If you can put up with my grammar and spelling errors I hope you throughly enjoy it. I tried to pace it and if you enjoy theses then wait until you get to the current arc

outside of the grammar issues... so far the story has been quite enjoyable to read. Fluttershy is usually a pretty solid choice for an "in" to the protagonist group of MLP. It also has a pretty okay pace so far.