Cut it here or make it massive? · 6:43am
Alright. So I am technically getting tired of this chapter.
I want action.
I want fighting.
I want blood spilling and I want it now.
But right now I want to end it here and now for this chapter.
No flashbacks in this chapter. Although they do talk a little of past events, there is no 'Suddenly first person view of the past.'
All in all, really well rounded so far.
Though, do you guys want it out now, and have an action pack chapter so chock full of fighting and explosions that you will beg me to return back to the former chapters later?
Or just one big chapter?
Because the first one will be done in a week or less, depending on my minions...er... "Partners and prereaders" in their quests to make sure the chapter is gold, the second...eh... Might be a month from now, maybe more.
Also, need someone fluent in the G1 my little pony to make sure of a scene can pass mustard.