>>455048455048

You're more than welcome.  I look forward to the next chapter.

>>455042455042

You were helpful. I greatly appreciate it. In fact, I appreciate it so much that I give you a Spike-stache:

Enjoy In all seriousness, thank you.

>>454980454980

No problem.  I'm just sorry I couldn't be more helpful with my feedback.

>>454962454962

Wow... you're probably the first person to give me negative feedback so far. That's awesome! Can't improve otherwise.

I'll try to work harder on the pacing. I would like to mention, though, that my first draft would have been FAR worse. Especially considering it was only half as long.

>>454447454447

No problem at all.  I generally just found it fun.  I totally get the joy of reader feedback; it makes the writing process that much better.

I gave you a like, which is more significant (in my eyes) than a fave (which is really just a track at this point), as well.  What did I enjoy about your story?  Well, the concept looks fun.  Everypony was in character, and your grammar, spelling, and formatting were all up to snuff.

Then, of course we have to go to what I found less awesome.  Something just felt off while I was reading.  I couldn't say what, exactly, but the pacing, especially where Twilight was entering Baltimare, felt flat.  Not too quick or too slow, but just sort of uninteresting?  I can't really articulate it well; maybe that it was too exposition-y?  I can't recall exactly what it was, being a few hours removed from reading it, but I remember losing the story a bit there.  It got better as the chapter went on, though there were still some issues.

So I guess my main gripe would be your pacing.  And, of course, that you didn't upload two chapters to begin with.  I want more, once we get to see everypony on their adventure.

azore24

Thanks for the fav on Of High Seas and Howling Winds!

If you don't mind me asking, what did you like about it?

Sorry, I just like getting feedback from readers

>>9972099720

Hey, neat, I helped bronify someone!  Also, got some lols from them.  I think that no person who writes fic can say they don't enjoy it.  Some of the more recent chapters have been a bit tough to do, but getting praise (mostly comments, but other stuff like views, faves, and stuff) really makes it worth it.

So, thanks!

Hey. I'm another instant fan of your SG-1 crossover, it being one of a few fics that got me straight-up howling with laughter (and into MLP, in my own lazy, roundabout way).

I'm just posting to say keep up the good work, and I hope you're having as much fun writing it as I do reading it.

Invisible Pink Unicorn!

>>4095540955

Thank you.  And meh~ first posts aren't that special at all