As I mentioned in my description, this is my first piece of fanfiction. It's also one of the first times I've tried to write something "seriously" (for lack of a better word). Normally when I write it's something like an in-character D&D session recap, or a short story about a RP character. Things like that. Or it's for work, which means it's an email. :D
The result of this has been a lot of nice feedback from people, as well as some suggestions on things I was doing wrong. I'm really happy to hear both of those. In response to some of the suggestions I've been working on revised versions of the first two chapters that take into account what I've been learning. Those are up now.
There's no real significant difference in the storyline, the changes are in grammar, word choice, description, and things like that. A couple of scenes in chapter 1 changed in tone, but they don't particularly alter the plot either. There's no point in re-reading anything.
All that work has delayed chapter 3, but it does exist and has a draft written. It needs some editing and such, but I hope to have it done soon.