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Big Macintosh seems like a simple pony who doesn't say much, but there's much more to him.
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Strange things have been happening in Appleloosa, and Braeburn has been caught in the middle.
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Hey all,

I just replaced the old version of "Free Ride" with a newer, updated version that fixes most of the problems in the original contest submission.  I also submitted it to Equestria Daily, so it would be a real treat if it gets posted there.

In other news, I'm thinking of working on a one-off story about Pinkie Pie in my spare time while also working on "The Outlaw," but life will get progressively more busy for me in the coming months.  

Thanks for reading, and have a good night!

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The Outlaw, The Star and the Big, Big Sky

Strange things have been happening in the little settler town of Appleloosa, and Braeburn has been caught right in the middle.  Tremendous earthquakes have rocked the deserts, the buffalo have been acting suspiciously, and a new arrival in town has left Braeburn questioning the life he thought he had.

(Note: This story is incomplete.  I need feedback, comments and suggestions on this story, as I hope to someday finish it.  Later reveals in the show will likely necessitate changes as this story was begun in August of 2011.)

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Macintosh

Big Macintosh seems like a simple pony who keeps to himself and doesn't say much, but there's more going on beneath the surface of this red stallion than it would seem at first glance. After his family urges him to go and make some friends in town, Big Macintosh finds himself meeting interesting ponies and discovering a whole world outside of his farm. But even with these new experiences, old memories and ghosts from the past resurface to haunt him. Big Macintosh finds himself confronted with something he thought he put behind him long ago…

(Originally written and posted to EqD in July 2011.  Contains some minor plot elements  and references to 'Opposites' which could possibly cause this story to be considered an "Alternate Universe" fic.)

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Opposites

Rarity finds it difficult to be generous to the pony who needs it most.  Can these two ponies, who don't seem to have anything in common, overcome their differences?

(Originally written and posted to EqD in April 2011, could possibly be considered an 'Alternate Universe' fic due to later reveals in the show.)

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Free Ride on the Friendship Express

After a big fight between the Cutie Mark Crusaders, Sweetie Belle wonders if she ever had any real friends.  When she sees how close her sister and her friends are as they prepare for their vacation, she becomes envious.  Wanting to make some new, real friends, she secretly joins them on their vacation.

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#107146 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>107135 Works for me! :pinkiehappy:

#107135 · 38w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>106988

Huh, that is interesting.  I didn't know that Lauren herself called him McIntosh. :applejackconfused:

Well, yeah, at this point it's too late to change his name.  Plus, Applejack does call him by his nickname, "Big Mac" in the show, and on that newly revealed Map of Equestria there are the Macintosh Hills to the south, so if nothing else I'll just say he was named after those :twistnerd:

Besides, most fans know him as Big Macintosh, and I personally think that name looks more appealing than McIntosh to read, but that's just me :eeyup:

Thanks for pointing that out, though! :twilightsmile:

#106988 · 38w, 2d ago · · ·
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Hey, TotalOverflow, buddy.

um.

Not that I'm suggesting you change anything (seriously, dont!) But I thought you may be interested to know about this.

I have just learned that the correct spelling for Big Mac's name is "Big McIntosh". The apple is spelled the same way (much to my surprise, I was sure it had an "a" in there.) so it makes sense. :eeyup:

#95304 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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>>95268

Still got the Aftermath to post :eeyup: but that will be it for now.

#95268 · 40w, 1d ago · · ·
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Duuude does this mean you finished your story here?

#94425 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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Thanks for reading, guys! :eeyup:

As for both of your questions, I guess we'll have to wait and see :ajsmug:

#94342 · 40w, 2d ago · · ·
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Very glad to see Macintosh posted here!  The story is a classic in the fandom, IMHO, and deserves as wide an audience as possible.

Any chance we'll be seeing The Outlaw, The Star, and the Big, Big, Sky here too, (even if it remains incomplete?)

#94222 · 40w, 3d ago · · ·
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Your Story "Macintosh" Has me completely HOOKED!!! Stories with Big Mac's POV are hard to find!! Hope you'll update more!!

Will shipping occur..? I curious. :pinkiehappy:

#93750 · 40w, 3d ago · · ·
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>>93600

Thanks for reading! :twilightsmile:

Actually, I live in Canada, but i actually wrote most of this story while vacationing in Switzerland :derpytongue2:

#93600 · 40w, 4d ago · · ·
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Been reading your Big Mac fic, and I like it, but I feel compelled to ask, do you live in the north or the south? Or are you a non-american?

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