BUT THIS!

My response(s) when I saw this:
So yeah I'm not happy about it, for the love of- THEY MADE SPIKE A DOG AND HE'S STILL IN LOVE WITH RARITY, THEY MADE A SPITFIRE (Or at least it looks like it might be her.) THE BAD GUY AND THE WHOLE THING IS ANOTHER CONTRIVED TOUGH LIFE FOR TEENAGE GIRLS IN HIGH SCHOOL THING.
Like we haven't had that from oh I don't know, Bratz Maybe? Or just look at the all the films Disney have done (Modern Disney, not the good old days). Let me guess, the human incarnation of Celestia and Luna are the headmistresses. Discord is Twilight's overbearing new teacher and why oh why does it look like they've set Soarin up as the love interest? Gah, so much hate right now! If Season 4 doesn't totally kick-ass then I am DONE with MLP.







Hello, kind sir. I see you are a FlutterSpike fan and i would like to invite you to my group, FlutterSpike. It is exactly what the group is called. The group was created specifically with the cutest couple in Equestria in mind. Your addition to the group would be wonderful!
sorry i addressed that in my talk about phase 3 did you get the pm
>>311208 I guess adventure? I don't know, I marked it as adventure but it's kinda hard to call it that when I only plan for there to be like 3 or 4 locations. Why not read it and judge for yourself?
what folder should i put it in ?
also there will be a top five best trixie stories vote on for the group it will be announced as one my blog posts so the only way to participate in it will be to follow me
>>311189 I assume you are reffering to my story Pride comes before a Fall? If you want to add it to your group then by all means do so. Keep in mind it is on hiatus at the moment, because I became frustrated at how no one wanted to read it, despite spending so much time on it. I do intend to go back to it at some point in the future however.
Hello sir or madame,
I am Obsidian Raindrop the creator of a group known as The Great and Not Obsessive Trixie I am here to ask if you would like your story to be added to my group.
The only requirements are:
1. You have a story about Trixie and she is not completely obsessing over her lose at the hands of Twilight. (She can hate that she lost to twilight and even try and beat again but she just can't be be so obsessive like she is in most stories. )
2. She may be a supporting character or a main character it does not matter.
3. i can`t think of a third thing
Sorry to all those who either received this email twice or who don`t have trixie as a main or supporting character. Also just PM me if you want your story added.
Hello,
It's me Obsidian again asking you guys to do stuff you don't want to.
1. tell me the name of your story and the one folder you want it in
2.join the group it is really cool and we'll soon get a banner up
3. fallow because it will boost my confidence
Yours truly, Obsidian Raindrop
>>286703 I'm hardly a King, more of a Jack at this point
>>286086 With you as my guide. I will steal your title as King of Writes
>>286041 Seriously? I''ve only just started myself. I'm not sure how qualified I am to give out tips. All I can say is, stick to Canon, but don't make pointless episode references if you can avoid it. Try not to spend too long in the intro discussing the weather, it's boring to read. Get a prereader. Read anything you write out loud. If it doesn't read right or seem to flow, it probably needs reworking. Write when you feel like it. As much as people may want a good story continued asap, writing when they want you to, rather than when you are in the right mind set has a bad effect on quality as you often don't filter what you write. That's all I can think of for now. At least from my experiences.
Any advice for writing?