Read some of your comments thought I'd give you a heads up that I plan to start my own shot at Prototype/ponies crossover, and having played both games and done my homework, I'll be using mercer.... soon as I figure out a decent overall plot xP
Thought I'd give you a heads up in case you had a particular interest in that crossover. Plus I think you'd be a decent sounding board for wether the story's any good or not xP
Check out the reply I just left, especially near the end. If there's anyway to make the Dishonored crossover work (where the ponies are in Dunwall), I think that would be it. Having Twilight and Rarity helping the others at the pub (which means they don't see the horrible things going on in the city for the most part) would provide great character development all around, especially between them and Emily, and might lead to avoiding the betrayal since the admiral will learn that sometimes trying to take everything for personal gain isn't always the best (and if not, Twilight would just fling him into a wall with magic).
I explained it in greater detail in my other post, so hopefully that will help you with ideas.
That does make sense. Anyway, your story has been great so far, so I think you'll be able to pull off a triple crossover. The only reason I even brought it up is that I've seen many crossovers which brought in so much stuff that it just became confusing to read. Though like I said, I doubt that'll happen to this story.
Regarding your concern over the addition to my crossover, I can make it work. At the moment, they were mentioned to make sure that when they actually appear during a dire situation to help turn the tide, no one can accuse me of pulling a Deus ex Machina.
Sadly, it seems that some people do not appreciate my creativity, and may continue to criticize me instead of support me. Naruto is going to need to be strong and have strong allies, especially when the first of my villains shows up.
I'm sorry if that's the impression you got, since that wasn't what I intended. Now, I didn't read every chapter, just enough to know it wasn't what I was looking for. Just to be clear, all I left was the comment. I didn't rate it up or down or anything.
Again, I'm sorry if you thought I just down-voted your story without reading it or something like that, because that is one thing I would never do (what gives me the right to give a rating without even reading it?).
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>>471872
Sounds interesting. I'll be sure to keep an eye out for it when it comes out.
Read some of your comments thought I'd give you a heads up that I plan to start my own shot at Prototype/ponies crossover, and having played both games and done my homework, I'll be using mercer.... soon as I figure out a decent overall plot xP
Thought I'd give you a heads up in case you had a particular interest in that crossover. Plus I think you'd be a decent sounding board for wether the story's any good or not xP
>>361075
Check out the reply I just left, especially near the end. If there's anyway to make the Dishonored crossover work (where the ponies are in Dunwall), I think that would be it. Having Twilight and Rarity helping the others at the pub (which means they don't see the horrible things going on in the city for the most part) would provide great character development all around, especially between them and Emily, and might lead to avoiding the betrayal since the admiral will learn that sometimes trying to take everything for personal gain isn't always the best (and if not, Twilight would just fling him into a wall with magic).
I explained it in greater detail in my other post, so hopefully that will help you with ideas.
I understand there is some darkness in my crossover idea. You sure there isn't another way for this story to work?
>>254137
That does make sense. Anyway, your story has been great so far, so I think you'll be able to pull off a triple crossover. The only reason I even brought it up is that I've seen many crossovers which brought in so much stuff that it just became confusing to read. Though like I said, I doubt that'll happen to this story.
Thanks for the comment.
Regarding your concern over the addition to my crossover, I can make it work. At the moment, they were mentioned to make sure that when they actually appear during a dire situation to help turn the tide, no one can accuse me of pulling a Deus ex Machina.
Sadly, it seems that some people do not appreciate my creativity, and may continue to criticize me instead of support me. Naruto is going to need to be strong and have strong allies, especially when the first of my villains shows up.
>>200412
That's fine, I figured that's what happened.
Sorry that was for someone else.
>>154202
I'm sorry if that's the impression you got, since that wasn't what I intended. Now, I didn't read every chapter, just enough to know it wasn't what I was looking for. Just to be clear, all I left was the comment. I didn't rate it up or down or anything.
Again, I'm sorry if you thought I just down-voted your story without reading it or something like that, because that is one thing I would never do (what gives me the right to give a rating without even reading it?).
Just wanted to clear that up.
>>154101
Oh, you just left the impression that you commented on my story without actually reading it.
That kind of ticks off authors, but I could have misinterpreted something.