Don't really know what ells to tell people. Just read the new part and leave feedback.
For the pegasus Dream Feather, it was a trip to Ponyville like any other. That is until he heard about the disappearance of Rainbow Dash. He never planned to do anything more than learn about it. And he certainly did not want the whole thing to turn into his personal adventure. Yet somehow he finds himself a pawn in the middle of a dangerous scheme.
Edit on 2012/11/17. I advice to reread chapter 9 if you read it BEFORE this date, I edited it a slight amount to make Dream Feather take the book with him. This was nessasery and the only reason I did not do so before was because I forgot.
Edit at date of chapter 5 release:
Credit to JohnPark( http://www.fimfiction.net/user/JohnPark ) for working as my prereader. You are doing a good job so far, I appreciate your help.
Also a Thank you to my ever so awesome Proofreader and editor James Winsterton. I doubt I could do anywhere near as well without you. I know you never asked for credit, but here it is either-way.More Less
Macbeth in a Pony setting and as a comedy, and very short.
This is neither a serious story nor a trollfic, it is just a very abridged piece of writing. This is due to the fact that I was forced to fit a 33k long PLAY into a 2k long story.(And I did throw some jokes into it.)
It also is a bit of a vent story I guess.
(It is under 2k if you do not count the crediting of Macbeth an MLP FIM)
So why did I write it?
I wrote this because my English teacher told us to do something creative which represnted knowledge of the play. Then a week later she told me it was meant to be in under 2k words, so I threw it all out and wrote this rather random version.
That's my story and I am sticking to it!More Less