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A mission to inviestigate a far off world takes an interesting twist.
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Fluttershy and Twilight enter a chess tournament to pay off a debt
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· When a freak solar event threatens Ponyville and Princess Celestia is nowhere to be found, Twilight desperately casts the only spell that she thinks will help: a spell that transforms her into a vampire. Forced to deal with the side effects, Twilight relies on her vampirical side as she ventures into a life-threatening situation for the sake of the princess, Ponyville, and quite possibly all of Equestria.
Based on and inspired by the artwork of ponykillerx - http://ponykillerx.deviantart.com/
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>>98717
That's definitely a good idea, looking back on it. I feel like present tense requires me to keep a sort of real-time feel to the pace, and it limits how much description I can fit in, not to mention people just aren't used to reading it that way. That last fact alone makes it dangerous to use.
If and when I actually publish my next story, it will be past tense for sure.
Thanks for the read!
Some advice: when you write a story make it in the past tense. I.e. 'Twilight Sparkle punched a llama in the nose.' instead of 'Twilight Sparkle punches a llama in the nose.'