Fallen Apprentice? · 3:29am
So I wrote a sort of one-shot to fill the gap while I'm working on Away From The Acres. It's fairly sad, from the response I've gotten so far, but I've only gotten positive comments, so I figured I would write a thanks to all the people that have read it so far, and another thanks for all the positive response it's been getting.
It's called Fallen Apprentice, and it may be viewed here. If you haven't seen it, I'd love to know what you think! When I can't think of anything to post for AFtA, I usually just write and erase short stories like this, so I'd love some criticism, since I went and posted it. Always looking to improve on writing.







>>433115
Mine is my first successful story! And I just can't write anything else into it. I've hit a kill-point, and I truly want to continue it, but it makes me sick that I can't add any more. I know that feel, man. Except most of my non-pony writing is just poetry, but nonetheless. Writer's block affects us all, I suppose.
I know how you feel. I'm writing two other stories right now (not pony) and one has been under the writer's block on and off for almost 6 years...
it makes me queasy to think about, because it's probably the thing that got me started writing in the first place.
>>433101
Indeed indeed! Still enjoying it, and still left wanting more after every chapter! Keep it going, good sir, and I pray that eventually, I can get over the writers block I've been experiencing for like, three months now.
So, belated thank you for fav on 'Chaser'! Also, thanks for the comments, and support.
It's really one of the main reasons I keep doing this, knowing that ponies are out there enjoying it.
Thanks for the fav
Thanks for the favorite, Machiniman. It's highly appreciated.
>>353496
When are you gonna are you gonna update your youtube channel? P.S: this is definitely not averagejacklp...
>>323802
Thank you very much!
Thanks a lot for the fave!
Thanks again, for sending me your corrections on most parts! The way you write is very professional.